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Revised Logline Critique Round - #9
TITLE: RAVEN'S WING
GENRE: YA fantasy with SF elements
When the king tries to force Veldt and her sisters to secretly bear his heirs, she escapes and joins the rebels as a spy. To save what's left of her family she leads a coup, but if Veldt fails, everyone she loves will die.
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Revised Logline Critique Round - #8
TITLE: Rhamiel's Fall ( Read more... ) -
Revised Logline Critique Round - #7
Title: BROKEN FOREST
Genre: YA FANTASY
Seventeen-year-old Avikar, a despondent farm-boy, leaves on a daring quest to rescue his kidnapped sister. He has no idea the kidnapper is really a shapeshifter from another world or that his whimsical sister has fallen for him
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Revised Logline Critique Round - #6
TITLE: Other ( Read more... ) -
Revised Logline Critique Round - #5
TITLE: Air Pirates ( Read more... ) -
Revised Logline Critique Round - #4
TITLE: ELECTRIFIED
GENRE: YA Urban Fantasy
While searching for her missing brother, seventeen-year-old Mira has an accident that endows her with electrifying powers. She'll need them to save herself and her brother from the denizens of New York's magical underbelly who plan to sell their life force to the highest bidder.
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Revised Logline Critique Round - #3
TITLE: The Children Of Iris: Discovery ( Read more... ) -
Revised Logline Critique Round - #2
TITLE: Shield & Crocus ( Read more... ) -
Revised Logline Critique Round - #1
TITLE: Hunter & Hunted ( Read more... ) -
Submissions are CLOSED
Submissions are closed for the Round 1 Logline Revision Critique!
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