Revised Logline Critique Round - #5
TITLE: Air Pirates
GENRE: YA Steampunk
The bravest thing Hagai's ever done is put peppers in his stew, but when he receives a seeing stone from his supposedly-dead mother, he joins a crew of air pirates to find her. With the Imperial Navy and the world's most ruthless pirate on his keel, Hagai has to figure out who he can trust before the vision the stone showed him comes true and he loses his mother. Again.
Read the original logline on MSFV.
GENRE: YA Steampunk
The bravest thing Hagai's ever done is put peppers in his stew, but when he receives a seeing stone from his supposedly-dead mother, he joins a crew of air pirates to find her. With the Imperial Navy and the world's most ruthless pirate on his keel, Hagai has to figure out who he can trust before the vision the stone showed him comes true and he loses his mother. Again.
Read the original logline on MSFV.