Revised Logline Critique Round - #2
TITLE: Shield & Crocus
GENRE: Adult Fantasy
Aging superhero First Sentinel finally has a chance to overthrow the oligarchs that have ruled his city for fifty years…but it means making a bargain with his oldest enemy, a gangster who has bought, schemed, and betrayed her way to the top. If First Sentinel cannot tip the balance of power soon, the oligarchs will hunt him down and crush his rebellion for good.
Read the original logline on MSFV.
GENRE: Adult Fantasy
Aging superhero First Sentinel finally has a chance to overthrow the oligarchs that have ruled his city for fifty years…but it means making a bargain with his oldest enemy, a gangster who has bought, schemed, and betrayed her way to the top. If First Sentinel cannot tip the balance of power soon, the oligarchs will hunt him down and crush his rebellion for good.
Read the original logline on MSFV.