Revised Logline Critique Round - #7

Oct 07, 2011 16:09

Title: BROKEN FOREST
Genre: YA FANTASY

Seventeen-year-old Avikar, a despondent farm-boy, leaves on a daring quest to rescue his kidnapped sister. He has no idea the kidnapper is really a shapeshifter from another world or that his whimsical sister has fallen for him

Read the original logline on MSFV.

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