Leave a comment

Comments 2587

Rise Kujikawa | Persona 4 | Reserved wishingforvilla November 21 2010, 05:02:07 UTC
Player Information
Name: Emely
Personal Journal: wishingforvilla
Contact Info: Email: ringcampana | plurk: calledvertigo
Other Characters: N/A

Reply

wishingforvilla November 21 2010, 05:04:26 UTC
Name: Rise Kujikawa
Source Canon: Persona 4
Age: 15
Role In Canon: Main Character / Battle Support. Rise is part of the Investigation Team, but unlike the other members she is nonplayable.
Justification: N/A
History: Wiki Link

Personality: Rise Kujikawa is a girl of many faces, albeit unintentionally since even she isn't sure who she is ( ... )

Reply

wishingforvilla November 21 2010, 05:04:47 UTC

Like most of the other main characters of Persona 4, Rise had to face her shadow, that is, the warped and exaggerated manifestation of that which she represses. The world her shadow created was a strip club named the Marukyu Revue, and her shadow wore nothing more than a skimpy yellow bikini and threatened to 'bare it all'. She said "I'm sick of being some airhead cliche who chokes down everything she'd fed and takes it all with a smile." Her shadow's desire to strip was Rise's desire to strip away her fake personality so that people could see who she really was, something that she had been unable to do because of her job and her shyness.

Abilities: In the game, Rise is a 'support' character. Like the other main characters she has a Persona, which is the strength of a person given physical form. Unlike the others, her Persona is not one that can fight. It lends her the ability, however, to be able to sense and analyze everything around her. These abilities allow her to find people, to figure out their strengths, weaknesses, and ( ... )

Reply

REVISION REQUESTED rosestolilies November 21 2010, 05:28:06 UTC
♥ Your personality section is solid, but we feel that the sample doesn't give a very good idea of the variety and potential of Rise's voice. If you could provide us with one more suited to the character, that would be great.

Reply


Nena Trinity | Gundam 00 | Reserved sparkledyne November 21 2010, 05:02:10 UTC
Player Information
Name: Debs
Personal Journal: sparkledyne
Contact Info: kyuupin (aim) & magicaldebs[at]gmail[dot]com (email) & zomgrobots (plurk)
Other Characters: N/A!

Character Information
Name: Nena Trinity
Source Canon: Gundam 00
Age: 17
Role In Canon: Secondary antagonist
Justification: N/A!
History: Oops, my finger slipped! She'll be coming in from during the time where her and her brothers are on the run from the world.

Reply

Nena Trinity | Gundam 00 | Reserved sparkledyne November 21 2010, 05:03:17 UTC
Personality:
At first glance, Nena Trinity might seem like a pretty normal teenage girl. She's outgoing and bubbly, and loves to use the peace sign. It's rare for her to have an expression other than a smile, and she's always up for having fun with others! That's where the similarities between her and a normal girl end, though. Her idea of fun tends to fall on the more violent side of things, not the normal teenage girl side of things. She has absolutely no problems with killing because she's bored, and has actually done it (and even thinks it's fun)! It was on a whim that she took out an entire wedding because it looked like they were having a lot more fun than she was. Yeah, the way she thinks is definitely a little skewed.

Nena has problems differentiating between what's right and what's wrong, and coupled with her tendency to not exactly think before she does something, it can lead to some pretty dangerous situations. This is because she doesn't exactly care about the possible consequences that could be awaiting her (and her ( ... )

Reply

Nena Trinity | Gundam 00 | Reserved sparkledyne November 21 2010, 05:03:52 UTC
Abilities:
Nena is a skilled Gundam pilot and the main support of the Trinity team. Her Gundam Throne Drei is a Gundam that can store GN particles and spread them out to create a stealth field (something that interferes with communication and helps keep the team from getting caught). She's also capable of transferring GN particles to another compatible unit as well. Outside of the Gundam, Nena knows how to use normal firearms, too.

It's been mentioned that Nena is capable of using quantum brainwaves as well, although the extent of her abilities hasn't been brought up in canon. What we do know about what she can do is that she can communicate with Veda (a super computer used by the organization Celestial Being and later the Innovators). It's due to this that Nena is, very likely, an excellent hacker. At one point in canon, Tieria caught her with Veda, and afterward, she had information on Lockon and Setsuna's past that Johann brought up later while in a fight. There's not really any other way that her brother could've gotten the ( ... )

Reply

Nena Trinity | Gundam 00 | Reserved oopsitslipped November 21 2010, 05:04:37 UTC
And here's the journal for the sample stuff!

Reply


reliablekiller November 21 2010, 05:02:28 UTC
Player Information
Name: Dalrint
Personal Journal: dalrint
Contact Info: aim: farobservr
Other Characters: Nope

Character Information
Name: Mireille Bouquet
Source Canon: Noir
Age: 20
Role In Canon: Main character
Justification: Dobedo.
History: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mireille_Bouquet

But I have one written up if you’d rather have that. Mireille is being taken from shortly after the second episode of the show, timeline wise.

Personality:Mireille is a cold woman, a side effect of a life of loss and death. That isn’t to say she is incapable of emotion, there are people she loves and cares about and things that she enjoys, but in her work, and in many ways the rest of her life, she has forced herself to remain distant. She has learned to do what is necessary, when other people cannot ( ... )

Reply

reliablekiller November 21 2010, 05:07:09 UTC
Abilities: Mireille is an expert shot with handguns and sniper rifles, and trained in several forms of hand to hand combat. She also fluent Italian, Corsican, English, French, and Russian. She’s conversational in German and Japanese.

She has no ‘abilities’ beyond a normal human, though.

Sample:

Perhaps here.

Or this would probably work.

And here!

And let’s go with this.

I can write something up else for you if you like.

Reply

REVISION REQUESTED rosestolilies November 21 2010, 05:38:44 UTC
♥ Your samples are definitely good and show voice more than well enough. But we'd like to see the personality fleshed out a bit more. Since Mireille is a main character, see if you can roughly double the wordcount expanding on the traits you've given and how they tie together to form her character.

Reply

Re: REVISION REQUESTED reliablekiller November 21 2010, 05:55:37 UTC
I do so hate personality sections. Here you are ( ... )

Reply


Winry Rockbell | Fullmetal Alchemist | Reserved wishingforvilla November 21 2010, 05:02:39 UTC
Player Information
Name: Emely
Personal Journal: wishingforvilla
Contact Info: Email: ringcampana | plurk: calledvertigo
Other Characters: N/A

Reply

wishingforvilla November 21 2010, 05:07:16 UTC
Character Information
Name: Winry Rockbell
Source Canon: Fullmetal Alchemist
Age: 15
Role In Canon: Secondary character ; childhood friend and mechanic of the protagonists.
Justification: N/A
History: Wiki Link

Personality: In her canon, Winry was born in 1899 in the fictional country of Amestris, one which parallels Germany but with various anachronisms. Due to the time period, and the village she was raised in, Winry is significantly more mature, confident, and independent than one would expect of someone her age. This is an aspect carried by almost all the children of FMA, and not just the primary and secondary characters, even background characters are shown to already have a good deal of independence. An example being Nelly, a girl and friend of the Rockbells and Elrics who already takes care of the animals and farm her family owns. For what we've seen of Rizenbul almost all of the kids take up their parents trade at an early age ( ... )

Reply

wishingforvilla November 21 2010, 05:08:46 UTC
Ironically, even though she is kind-spirited in that manner, she also has has a terrifyingly large temper. Anger is something that Winry unfortunately has a lot of, to the point of it almost being unhealthy. In some ways it helps--she gets angry more than she gets upset so it can serve as a driving force as opposed to wallowing--but anger of course is a very dangerous emotion so it sometimes leads her to take very aggressive and impulsive actions. This is shown in small portions by her habit of wrenching or punching people when they annoy her, which happens regularly (at least where Ed is concerned) but even this is only scratching at the surface. After all, she was willing to pick up a gun and point it at someone, and even if she didn't shoot that is still a very significant action. She is a person easy to anger, but easy to forgive (or at least tolerate). She isn’t the type to hold grudges and despite her tantrums she would never seriously harm anyone close to her, and learns to persevere both emotionally and the presence of others ( ... )

Reply

wishingforvilla November 21 2010, 05:08:59 UTC
The fact that she forms attachments so quickly can also be considered a weakness to some degree. Winry tries to find the best in everyone, and sometimes she gives people who more chances and doubt than they deserve. Part of it is due to a somewhat naïve desire to believe that there is good in everyone, so that she can try and understand why some of the things back in Amestris are the way they are.

Sample: Samples from adstringendum

Sample 1 from adstringendum

Reply


Hayate Yagami | Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha el_hustino November 21 2010, 05:03:29 UTC
Player Information
Name: Hustino
Personal Journal: el_hustino
Contact Info: hustino [at] gmail [dot] com ; elhustino [AIM]
Other Characters: N/A

Character Information
Name: Hayate Yagami
Source Canon: Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha
Age: 25
Role In Canon: She is one of the three primary protagonists, although she falls more to the wayside later in canon; she is a high-ranking military commander and the most high-ranked mage in the series.
History: Hayate appears in A’s, StrikerS, StrikerS Sound Stage X, Vivid, and Force, summaries for all of which can be found here.

Reply

el_hustino November 21 2010, 05:03:53 UTC
Personality: Hayate’s personality is one of somewhat conflicting extremes all dependant on the situation. Firstly, Hayate is a caring, compassionate woman; she loves her friends and ‘family’-Hayate has no blood relatives, but considers the Wolkenritter her beloved family without a doubt, calling them her ‘kids’ even when she was a child-more than anything else. Her concept of ‘friend’ is pretty expansive, as it includes Nanoha and Fate-former enemies of her Wolkenritter family-as well as the Nakajima family, which consists predominantly of reformed ex-terrorists, though they had no control over their situation. She goes out of her way to make others happy: she is likely the goofiest of the eldest characters, often making silly jokes, acting hyperactive, designing cute or attractive cosplay for others to wear, groping other’s breasts lovingly, or dragging others to vacations and parties ( ... )

Reply

el_hustino November 21 2010, 05:04:22 UTC
Hayate is also a workaholic, which is likely another result of her restricted childhood as a paraplegic as well as ending up classified as a criminal due to possessing a highly dangerous and illegal device (The Tome of the Night Sky) as well as the illegal, violent actions the Wolkenritter took in hopes of healing Hayate of her illness. Hayate has an obsession with performing her military obligations to the fullest and bringing criminals to justice swiftly and often violently; unlike Fate and Nanoha who have rejected promotions, Hayate accepts them proudly and has risen through the ranks of the military at an incredible speed: at the age of 25 she commands the investigative division of the TSAB’s military as well as her own massive battleship the Wolfram. Her obsession with work tends to be so bad that others must remind her to calm down, though she does know how to relax in-between missions (such as in Vivid when nothing requiring her attention in regards to the military was happening), but if she assigns herself to something-such as ( ... )

Reply

ACCEPTED rosestolilies November 21 2010, 05:33:25 UTC
♥ Welcome to Queen of Hearts!

What to do now:
♥ Put in a request to join queenofheartsrp, queenoflogs, and queenofooc.
♥ If necessary for your character, create a permissions post.
♥ Go here and fill out the form to have your character put on the taken list.
♥ Optionally, join queenofwhat (our community for spam, memes, and general fooling around).
♥ Once your membership has been approved, introduce yourself in queenofooc so we can get to know you and your character.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up