jailbird songs, chap 10 out of 11.

[tongzhiai]

Last chapter before Christmas aaand epilogue after Christmas but hopefully before New Year's. Sound good/reasonable?

first chapter // second chapter // third chapter // fourth chapter // fifth chapter // sixth chapter // seventh chapter // eighth chapter // ninth chapter

jailbird songs, chapter 10 out of 11

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[imajo]

FIRST!

[imajo]

survey says: giant win, as always. i started picking out my favourite lines to quote back to you in an appropriately congratulatory manner, but the comment got very long.

[tongzhiai]

Eee, I don't mind enormous comments at all, I love it when people quote stuff because then I have an excuse to ramble about my writing.

Thank you, thank you. ♥

[imajo]

oh, go on then. just a few.

I ..masturbate? Donghae thought, trying to wrap his head around the idea that his interest in pornography could be taken as a productive passtime.
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“Have you had sex with Dr Kim Kibum?”

“Yes,” Donghae said, and then realized the question. “I mean, no! Definitely no, no sex at all.”
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“Yeah, yeah, and Hyukjae's gay and Kyuhyun makes a lot of noise in bed, it's all old news,” Yesung said tiredly.
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“I gotta go ask Donghae whether I have therapy today,” Shindong said, standing up.
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“Fresh smell of envy in the air,” Shindong commented.

“Or then you just didn't wash this morning,” Kangin replied.

“And whose fault would that be,” Shindong asked sardonically. “You guys took your time in the shower this morning.”

there! ramble away :)

[tyreling]

spot

[tyreling]

*dedededededed* kajsdkjfksdkfds~! Ahaha, I admit I'm not really a Shinhwa fan but I think I can understand where all the jokes come from. asjfjds~~ Ahaha! I died laughing imagining Donghae getting "assaulted" by them XDD; I only saw a few of Shinhwa appearances on my X-man dvds for example the crab dance XDDD. A,fdnfdf! I really enjoyed this chapter. Ahaha! It's quite a strange way to interrogate prisoners. There's just too many LOVE to say about this chapter~~ <333 *Sends you hearts and more hearts*
Please keep it up and look after your health! Darn it! I've missed first spot.

[tongzhiai]

Most of the Shinhwa jokes are "youtubeable". Like Hyesung+Eric Banana Song. And yes, Crab Dance. And Mummy Buy Me That Dance etc. Then there's just some general made up Shinhwa goofiness. :D

Thank you very much. Glad you enjoyed it!

[tyreling]

XDDD Ahaha, so I've realized. They all killed me every time I watch the X-man episodes they are featured.

<33

[comicbookending]

I. Love. It. So. Much.

I was laughing the whole time. Shinhwa is amazing here, I love their dynamics. 8D And. I don't know, I can't even point any one part out, everything was great. The last scene was cool, because for some reason I never imagined Warden Choi to be that lenient if/when he finds out about one of the staff "exchanging shirts" with one of the inmates. By the way, hello new euphemism.

Anyways. You're awesome. I'm off to read the extras now. 8D

[tongzhiai]

I feel like I didn't quite achieve the level of insanity that Shinhwa has irl but ah, that might be impossible anyway.

Warden Choi, well, yeah, he'd be stricter if I felt that didn't bring down the happy level of the fic. Because it is, and it continues to be a happy fic. Kibum getting the boot would be too realistic to be happy so instead Siwon's just like "Yeah, whatever, don't do it twice."

Thank you for your comment, as always. ^^;

[tongzhiai]

Not that close. The last chap will be looooong and then epilogue ..well, assumably, will be loooong, too. And the three million post-epilogue story snippets I've written. Hoboy. It's nowhere near the end, worry not. ^^;

Thank you, glad you liked it!

[tongzhiai]

Sooo busted. By everybody, though.

Thank youuu.