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Out of Choices - Chapter 45

Aug 31, 2009 16:40

Title: Out Of Choices
Chapter 45: Beginnings (Previous Chapters: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19.1, 19.2, 20, 21, 22.1, 22.2, 23, 24, 25, 26, 27, 28, 29, 30, 31, 32, 33.1, 33.2, 34, 35, 36, 37, 38, 39, 40, 41, 42, 43, 44, 45)
Author:JCAddict/picklewinkle/Sher
Fandom: Twilight
Word Count:9,195
Rating: R/M, for sex ( Read more... )

ooc, twilight, fanfiction

Comments 5

Thanks! mad4hugh August 31 2009, 21:40:48 UTC

You made me happy today! I was just thinking this past weekend about you and your Bella and Edward!

susieqtaj143 September 1 2009, 03:40:50 UTC

hello my love!and as usual,this was fantastic!you described her change better than i've ever seen it, and it was great to read how of course he stayed by her through the whole tranformation.and true to bella form, she is her own snarky loveable self, and only wants him, and not all the pretenses.what she really wants is a little lovin, vampire style!you know i love you, and this story rocks the fan fiction world!much love to you as always,and even though i know that this is coming to end, i will always be happy that i met you!!

jkrumrn September 1 2009, 22:58:04 UTC

Thank you for the update. It was nice to see how she was fine with the transformation. I am excited to see if she is going to meet up with Charlie and what happens. I enjoyed the idea of her being able to feel and hear Edward while she was transforming. Very sweet. Thanks again for another terrific chapter.

;D karinna_a_a2012 September 5 2009, 17:04:12 UTC

oh my goodness...this would have to be the best...no the best of the best twilight fan-fiction that I have ever read. 45 chapters of wonderful. Your wording...just blew my breath away. I know I'm a little late on reading it. You know a fanfic is good though when you keep on reading the chapters without stopping. 3 days it took me. Bravo!

optimistic4ever January 29 2010, 21:51:48 UTC

Wow! I really loved this chapter Sher. I really enjoyed reading about the transformation from Bella's point of view. Edward was able to explain his own transformation, but Bella didn't react the same way that he did. She didn't want to scare him anymore with the amount of pain that she was feeling, so by concentrating on the end result, eternity with Edward, she was able to block it out. How great it was when she realized that he saved her and never intended to leave her. I love that she thanked him for doing what he did, and the kiss that they shared was wonderful. By the way, before I forget, I love the use of colors in the first part of this chapter. Warming colors were there while she was relaxed, and the descriptions were wonderful leading into the blackness and pain. Awesome writing here Sher ( ... )