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Out of Choices - Chapter 39

Jun 12, 2009 21:58

Title: Out Of Choices
Chapter 39: Awakening (Previous Chapters: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19.1, 19.2, 20, 21, 22.1, 22.2, 23, 24, 25, 26, 27, 28, 29, 30, 31, 32, 33.1, 33.2, 34, 35, 36, 37, 38, 39)
Author:JCAddict/picklewinkle/Sher
Fandom: Twilight
Word Count:7,470
Rating: R/M, for sex and language
Story Summary ( Read more... )

ooc, twilight, fanfiction

Comments 6

susieqtaj143 June 13 2009, 16:59:55 UTC

this chapter was awesome sher! i couldn't read it fast enough.i was so sure that at first bella was going to hate edward, until she started to reason with herself.love does conquer all sometimes!i have to believe that!much love to you as usual!your writing is flawless for these two!

giz_m June 13 2009, 20:35:34 UTC

Hi, I'm bad at reviews but I just wanted to tell you that you are an amazing writer. I've just finished reading all chapters and this story is absolutely perfect. I can't wait for more.

hairsprayx12 June 14 2009, 04:43:45 UTC

Sher *thud*

Good God, woman!!!!!

I so want to be you if I ever grow up :P

You are so damn talented Sher and with every chapter I become more and more invested in this couple and in their life.

It all seems so real and natural and I know we are talking about vampires and werewolves and the whatnot but really that's just secondary...what makes this rock is all the emotions and feelings and just everything that make a great romance great. Its about heart. It's about what makes it beat, and not the blood (no pun intended, though it would be a good one) but the all encompassing emotion that can make it beat so fast like it's going to come flying out of your chest or make it beat slowly and peacefully, lulling you into slumber, or make it stop with fright and fear of loss, or make it just shatter and break into a million pieces of pain when that loss happens, it's about love.

Damn Sher, you make me gush like a spaz :P

So I'm going to stop now and wait for the next awesome chapter impatiently...hmmm...K...

eveaddict80 June 14 2009, 07:28:38 UTC

You've done it again! Awesome job with the train of thought Bella had. Lovin' it!

AWESOME mrsmulder14 June 18 2009, 15:57:32 UTC

NO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO how could you do this to me how could you just stop it there i need more i just took four days to read all this and i need more your writing is so awesome i love this so much i think it may be bettter than twilight it is so much more realistic and dirty sexy which i love reading i love the way you have done this and i hope you do a lot more with it please!!!!!!!!!