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Out of Choices - Chapter 38

Jun 11, 2009 00:54

Title: Out Of Choices
Chapter 38: Disaster (Previous Chapters: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19.1, 19.2, 20, 21, 22.1, 22.2, 23, 24, 25, 26, 27, 28, 29, 30, 31, 32, 33.1, 33.2, 34, 35, 36, 37, 38)
Author:JCAddict/picklewinkle/Sher
Fandom: Twilight
Word Count:8,546
Rating: R/M, for sex and language
Story Summary: ( Read more... )

ooc, twilight, fanfiction

Comments 5

hairsprayx12 June 11 2009, 16:24:21 UTC

Oh god Sher...I'm crying the snotty cry woman....I feel so bad for both of them...my heart just aches

susieqtaj143 June 11 2009, 16:44:52 UTC

sher, this was a really great chapter as always!i totally ache for edward, and i hate rosalie, which in turn makes me hate nikki reed even more!lol!hopefully bella will be able to deal with everything alright.i can only imagine what is going on in her head right now!much love to you as always!!

hairsprayx12 June 11 2009, 22:48:17 UTC

Okay so I read it again and...damn Sher...god it still hurt...

baby_sweet030 June 13 2009, 01:39:21 UTC

Hi, I'm Lynn. I just recently joined LJ and am interested in making new friends. As the saying goes you can never have enough. I'm a Zikki fan and would love to read your fanfics, if you have any. But even if you don't still add me. I would love to better get to know you Lj people.

optimistic4ever January 27 2010, 05:37:38 UTC

OMG Sher. This chapter broke me! It really made me cry. I ache for Edward and Bella and this secret that has come between them. Bella has to forgive Edward for not telling her earlier. After all, she told him that she didn't want to know. This never would have happened in the first place if she had just stayed home. If she had waited for Edward to return, he could have explained things to her without the vision that is embedded in her memory now. She has to take some of the blame for this in the end.

Now, on to Jacob. I will be honest with you....I didn't see that one coming. Nice job with that. I figured that maybe it would have been Emit, or even Carlisle, but not Jacob. I think the reason is because Jacob is younger than Edward and Bella, and he shouldn't have been in the forest at that time either. Well, I love this story, you already know this, and I can't wait to read the next part! Please fix them though......soon!