Out of Choices - Chapter 37

Jun 05, 2009 19:09

Title: Out Of Choices
Chapter 37: Nightmare (Previous Chapters: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19.1, 19.2, 20, 21, 22.1, 22.2, 23, 24, 25, 26, 27, 28, 29, 30, 31, 32, 33.1, 33.2, 34, 35, 36, 37)
Author:JCAddict/picklewinkle/Sher
Fandom: Twilight
Word Count:5,356
Rating: R/M, for sex and language
Story Summary: Bella ( Read more... )

ooc, twilight, fanfiction

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eveaddict80 June 6 2009, 02:49:50 UTC
Umm, wtf? Lol, jk. Very suspenseful, I hope from the bottom of my heart you update soon cuz dang, I NEED to know what happened. Who was holding her, Emmitt? What did Rose do?! Aye, well, can't wait for more, much luv!

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susieqtaj143 June 6 2009, 04:07:22 UTC
as always sher, that was awesome!guess our poor bella is gonna find out some things a little sooner than later huh?very suspenseful writing while she was in the forest!should be interesting to see how edward tries to explain this!much love to you as always dear!

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hairsprayx12 June 7 2009, 02:29:42 UTC
Holy crap!!!

Oh holy crap!!!!!

Fix it Sher!!!!

Just fix it!!! I'm so freaked out right now!!!!

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optimistic4ever January 27 2010, 04:07:50 UTC
Wow Sher, this was a great chapter....very suspenseful. I can't believe that Bella would go to the forest alone at night for starters, however, I find it interesting that she found Rose there feasting on a deer of all things. She is really in for a rude awakening when she has that talk with Edward now. She is in complete shock right now, so she isn't going to know what is real or imagined. I am really looking forward to the next chapter. I need to know who it was that was carrying her, who found her first, and how Edward is going to explain his family to her. I can't wait! Nice job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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