Enchanted, parts 57-60

Nov 18, 2007 20:35

Title: Enchanted
Team Name: Spy for the Order
Word Count: 4x100
Rating: PG
Challenge: Bookmark challenge
Characters: Hermione, Severus
A/N: Post-DH (epilogue ignored). Thanks again to a_bees_buzz for making it better. Previous instalments: 1-4, 5-8, 9-12, 13-16, 17-20, 21-24, 25-28, 29-32, 33-36, 37-40, 41-44, 45-48, 49-52, 53-56For the next few days, ( Read more... )

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firefly124 November 18 2007, 19:13:12 UTC
‘I didn’t do a very good job of that though, did I?’

I imagine that really would eat at him. Never mind that what he could do was limited by the fact that if he were found out, he would be able to help no one at all, I can see him beating himself up for not shielding them better.

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kribu November 18 2007, 21:00:47 UTC
I think it would, yes. Just imagining his pain during that time makes me hurt too. :-(

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harmony_bites November 18 2007, 19:17:17 UTC
‘I didn’t do a very good job of that though, did I?’ he spat out.

And that is why I don't think I could bear to write or read about Snape during this period--especially since he was so utterly alone. However...

Without thinking, she grasped his hand.

Awwww. You made it all better.

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kribu November 18 2007, 21:02:56 UTC
I know, I really wouldn't want to go too deep into that year from his point of view either! *sniffles*

I think she's understanding that pain, at least to an extent.

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dickgloucester November 18 2007, 19:17:30 UTC
You can't stop there!!!!!!!!!!

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kribu November 18 2007, 21:03:24 UTC
I just did. *whistles innocently*

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dickgloucester November 18 2007, 21:06:23 UTC
*Grabs you by the scruff of the neck and sits you down in front of the computer again.*
Now write, dammit!

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kribu November 18 2007, 21:13:01 UTC
Too late, sorry! My muse has already waltzed off for the day. Probably having a party with the plot bunnies somewhere (and I've not been invited).

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mistaria November 18 2007, 19:18:47 UTC
Oh my! How indecorous of her, grabbing Sev's hand like that! ::laughs::

Kidding, of course. Another great installment, and I know I've been a lurker to this series but I have been enjoying it through the week. :) <3 Good luck with the rest, I will be here like a good little lurker to read it.

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kribu November 18 2007, 21:04:25 UTC
I'm getting all daring with this set. ;-)

Thanks! It's always so good to know that people are actually reading and enjoying it. :-)

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sbrande November 18 2007, 19:34:54 UTC
I feel Severus anguish. He was always alone, in the shadows, trying to protect the innocents. Yes, a few slipped through the cracks but that is all part and parcel of the game.

What will he do now??? With Hermione holding onto his hand? You can not stop there, seriously.

Love Sonia :)

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kribu November 18 2007, 21:07:42 UTC
Hmm... we'll have to see. Somehow I don't really foresee hot passionate sex in the middle of the infirmary in tomorrow's set quite yet though. ;-)

Thanks!

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sbrande November 18 2007, 21:48:42 UTC
And why not? That would sure add a twist of a different kind into your drabbling! Think about it, LOL...

Love Sonia :)

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kribu November 18 2007, 21:57:01 UTC
I think Madam Pomfrey might mind. And tell Hermione to leave! ;-)

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