39 Playing the Victim Card

Jan 06, 2012 11:38

Word Soap: As The World Keeps Turning
Author: SYLnl
Title:  #39 Playing the Victim Card
Rating: PG
Summary:  Guess who’s not happy right now?
Big Thanks To: ltklo, for brushing up my grammar

Previously on As The World Keeps Turning:

#1     #2    #3    #4    #5    #6    #7    #8    #9    #10    #11    #12    #13    #14    #15    #16    #17     #18    #19    #20  
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lure, word soap, fan fiction, !author|artist: sylnl, romance, atwt, luke snyder, drama, rating pg, noah mayer, dr. reid oliver, luke/reid

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scotianova January 6 2012, 11:08:41 UTC
well there is so much I love about this chapter!

"Reid laughed out loud. Luke knew him so well." -> He does! Cutest!

Noah felt cheated. He got the clingy, needy, badgering, insecure and problematic Luke and that arrogant bastard got this version. It just wasn’t fair...-> what a great idea to show Noah's refusal to see the truth!(but, we all know he is not alone with that:))

"Respond or not respond, that was the question." -> Such a funny line! Modified Hamlet in Oakdale - just great!

...as I've said before... there's so much I love...!

NOW I can move on and work!

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sylnl January 6 2012, 18:08:01 UTC
YEAH!!! Thanks!!! It wasn't enough Noah bashing to my liking, but it was fun to write this strong!Luke!!!

I'm SO glad I'm stimulating your productivity, hahaha. Thanks for the great feedback!

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ltklo January 6 2012, 12:20:39 UTC
It's nice to see Luke really stand up for himself and deal with Noah (with a little help from Margo). The best is that Abigail overheard so she has a fuller picture of Noah.

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sylnl January 6 2012, 18:10:41 UTC
Exactly! I do wonder about those two. But I just lean back and trust all will be revealed:-)

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tldreamer January 6 2012, 12:42:56 UTC
sylnl January 6 2012, 18:11:09 UTC
Lost for words?:-))))

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tldreamer January 6 2012, 22:34:37 UTC
I thought I commented about Noah, but I guess that old adage about "if you've got nothing good to say, don't say anything at all" took over here!!!

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sylnl January 6 2012, 22:53:27 UTC
NOW you have me curious:-))) I also get the feedback by mail and that was empty too, so you've been filtered out from the start:-)))) that must have been quite an earful:-)))

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bkwermy323 January 6 2012, 13:38:50 UTC
Hell yeah, Luke! This was an amazing update! I'm so glad that he stood up to Noah! The part where Noah was thinking of Luke as clingy really boiled my blood. He is such an ass! Can't wait for the next update!

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sylnl January 6 2012, 18:15:02 UTC
Yeah, Noah is some piece of work:-) Well... at least he finally triggered Luke enough to draw the line. It was about time too:-)

Thanks for the feedback!

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sylnl January 6 2012, 18:17:28 UTC
I got the distinct impression you liked it:-)))) Thanks for the outburst. It made me laugh out loud.

Noah and growing up... I hope so, but I'm not sure... let's keep in mind how he was raised. And by who....

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