Enchanted, parts 69-75

Nov 21, 2007 23:38

Title: Enchanted
Team Name: Spy for the Order
Word Count: 7x100
Rating: PG-13
Challenge: Bookmark challenge
Characters: Hermione, Severus
A/N: Post-DH (epilogue ignored). Thanks to a_bees_buzz for correcting my grammar and suggesting improvements! Previous instalments: 1-4, 5-8, 9-12, 13-16, 17-20, 21-24, 25-28, 29-32, 33-36, 37-40, 41-44, 45-48, 49-52, 53-56Read more... )

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dickgloucester November 21 2007, 22:09:14 UTC
Silly!Severus - I like this whimsical side of him.

That was a really lovely drabble series. Really. Lovely.

Now, take a deep breath and write me another one, with another happy ending. (I'm not a demanding person, really.... It's just greed.)

Is there a "which deadly sin are you?" quiz out there, somewhere, do you think?

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kribu November 21 2007, 22:39:55 UTC
Thank you! :-)

write me another one, with another happy ending.

Another drabble or another series? *eyes warily*

I don't know about the quiz, but I'd probably be avarice too...

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dickgloucester November 22 2007, 07:06:34 UTC
Oh, but greed/gluttony and avarice are diffrent sins...

Another drabble and another series. Just keep at it, Ms "I can't write for toffee"!!!

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kribu November 22 2007, 07:20:03 UTC
Damn - well, close enough. ;-) I just consider them all part of the "me wants things" approach.

This writing thing is rather fun really... although I'd feel more confident if I already had some sort of clue where things are headed when I start! At least with this one, I had the ending figured out in vague terms about three days before finishing. And at least the last one sort of wrote itself - it was the first time really where I had it composed pretty much word by word a good 20 hours before actually sitting down at the computer for it!

I don't even know whether I should take a short break now or not. I probably should, with work wearing me out this week, but that really depends on the plot bunnies.

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firefly124 November 21 2007, 22:21:22 UTC
‘I’m thinking of building a miniature replica of Hogwarts.’

‘In my belly button?’

‘Why not? It’s the perfect place for the dungeons.’

ROFLMAO!!

Lovely wrap-up. This has been a great series. Thanks for writing these drabbles and sharing them.

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kribu November 21 2007, 22:40:46 UTC
Thanks so much for reading them! :-) Writing them was great fun.

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a_bees_buzz November 21 2007, 22:22:17 UTC
while I’ve never believed in lavishing praise on dunderheads, I am aware of your academic abilities.

Such high praise from Severus! And then ...

As you’re done with your exams, I think you may stop calling me Professor

It must be lurve! Of course, this ...

I’m seeing how much sand and water I can fit in your navel

had me swooning. So much implied action and such a significant shift in his behavior in such an innocent-seeming phrase - it's beautifully subtle.

This series has been a pleasure to read, m'dear.

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kribu November 21 2007, 22:43:54 UTC
Thank you so much! :-) For the praise and for all the help!

And I'm glad the last one worked... it was one of those ideas I tend to get right before falling asleep, so I never quite know the next day if they actually work as intended or not.

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sbrande November 21 2007, 22:33:02 UTC
LOL.... Well that was fun while it lasted. Thank you so very much for bringing a smile to my face.

Love Sonia :)

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kribu November 21 2007, 22:44:23 UTC
You're most welcome! It was a lot of fun to write, too.

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droxy November 22 2007, 00:54:24 UTC
Oh that ending was funny, imaginative, and fluffy. :D

Flustered Severus is always cute.

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kribu November 22 2007, 06:09:54 UTC
Thanks! I really felt like some fluff after all this build-up. :-D

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