Title: Literary Criticism, pt. 2

[alicebluegown16]

Title: Literary Criticism
Author: alicebluegown16
Rating: NC-17 (and how!)
Pairing/Characters: Will/Finn, mentions of past Will/Terri and Will/OMC
Summary: Will and Finn bonding over books. And also blowjobs.
AN: Part of my series that includes  Closer , Hollywood Ending, All in My Head , My Mind is Set on You , Tell the Truth Now, Subtext, This Side of

Comments

[hopenight]

This made my shitty day so much better. And I can't believe you dedicated this to me. Like tears sprang up because it was so sweet and it made me feel good

[alicebluegown16]

Aw, hon

[hopenight]

Seriously it gave me warm fuzzies. Then my day took a craptastic turn. Then after I got on my computer, I re-read it and made feel better all over again

[hermiones_twin]

I love your stuff. I like how it's funny, how it inquires into the "why" of things, how it's hot, how it makes me think, how it makes me Google movies and books I've never seen, etc.

And also, I kind of want to marry your Will. (And by "kind of" I mean "really.")

[alicebluegown16]

Thanks for commenting and sorry it took so long to reply!

I've been sick and then I was busy working on the impossibly more porny sequel to this!

http://alicebluegown16.livejournal.com/50502.html#cutid1

Thrilled you enjoyed this and that my version of Will is working for you--I loves my kind of fucked up but still sweet and sexy Mr. Schue.

[madmenfanatic]

I was sooo jonesing for a winnners fic! In fact the last few days I have entertained myself with re-reading your previous series (where it goes from them meeting in a hypo--, fake bar (as Finn puts it)to Finn becoming an awesome social worker

[alicebluegown16]

Thanks for the wonderful long comment and I am soooooo sorry it took so long to reply!

Real life kind of decided to be a butthole there for awhile!

Thrilled the characterization of Finn as more intellectually incurious as opposed to dumb worked for you. I kind of fell in love with that idea and I was worried that it might seem out of character.

As to Will, I think it was a case of he picked up on the fact that Finn freaked and then when Finn came back and nothing really changed between them he assumed that Finn just needed time and a little space to think and he gave it to him.

Same with him taking Finn to bed. He wasn't going to push the issue because he didn't want to rock the boat, but the second Finn made it clear he was ready, Will would most defintely be enthusiastic.

Anyway, thanks again for commenting and here, HAVE MORE PORN!

http://alicebluegown16.livejournal.com/50502.html#cutid1

So I actually tried to take notes this time

[momoda6]

I had wordpad open and everything and I swore I'd note down anything I wanted to commend you on, but I think I got far too carried away and distracted because I only made a few points when I know there were about a million things that were amazing about this.

I copied two quotes, and I'm sure they're not the only lines I thought were amazing, but for some reason they're the only two I copied into wordpad:
'For years he’s thought that poetry was stupid and gay (as in boring) and now he’s finding out that there is poetry out there that is very much not stupid and that is gay as in there is poetry about dick sucking and why was he not informed of this sooner?'

'...this is the first time Finn’s ever used the word debauched in a sentence, but there you go, that’s Will right now...So yeah, those were amazing and funny

Re: So I actually tried to take notes this time

[alicebluegown16]

Thanks for commenting and I'm laughing at the fact that you took notes! It's kind of flattering and hilarious.

I loved writing my literature inspired porn and Finn learning about the joy of learning and him being such an adorkable insecure teenage boy in lurve.

And even though canon has apparently decided to crap all over my theory of secret!math dork Puck, I still will stubbornly cling to it.

[sanj]

*wild applause*