Title: Literary Criticism, pt. 2

[alicebluegown16]

Title: Literary Criticism
Author: alicebluegown16
Rating: NC-17 (and how!)
Pairing/Characters: Will/Finn, mentions of past Will/Terri and Will/OMC
Summary: Will and Finn bonding over books. And also blowjobs.
AN: Part of my series that includes  Closer , Hollywood Ending, All in My Head , My Mind is Set on You , Tell the Truth Now, Subtext, This Side of

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So I actually tried to take notes this time

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I had wordpad open and everything and I swore I'd note down anything I wanted to commend you on, but I think I got far too carried away and distracted because I only made a few points when I know there were about a million things that were amazing about this.

I copied two quotes, and I'm sure they're not the only lines I thought were amazing, but for some reason they're the only two I copied into wordpad:
'For years he’s thought that poetry was stupid and gay (as in boring) and now he’s finding out that there is poetry out there that is very much not stupid and that is gay as in there is poetry about dick sucking and why was he not informed of this sooner?'

'...this is the first time Finn’s ever used the word debauched in a sentence, but there you go, that’s Will right now...'

So yeah, those were amazing and funny.

The sex and stuff was... I actually made a bullet point that was just sdjkflnskldfnksdnjf. So yeah. The scene in the laundry room was almost as hot, if not hotter, than the actual sex somehow. Maybe I just want Will to casually derobe in front of me, idk. The line about hickeys was, ugh, I so wasn't prepared for that and I probably made the same sound as Finn did. 'Bad blowjob etiquette' made me lol. The no pants policy was \o/, and I think if either of them actually did open the door naked I could die happy from the amazingness of it all.

I liked how this wasn't necessarily a lead on, and how it kind of fitted in with the story about Kurt finding out. That was kind of cool and unexpected, and Finn convincing Will that it was fine was really cute.

The wasabi part was funny. I can't tell you the fun times I've had with wasabi in the past. >.>

But yeah... now that I'm getting over the hot porn factor, I kind of want to read something. I've kind of become allergic to books since I spend so much time on the computer, and I find it hard to read more than about 10 pages at a time. Now I'm just thinking, if Finn can read that many books then why the hell do I not read anything? Like, we had to read a book for college last year and I swear it took me like 8 months, and it seemed like such a chore. It wasn't even particularly bad, I just... idk.

...Maybe if I start with the gay poetry book I'll get back into it. xD Or I need Will to motivate me with making out and wearing sexy jeans with no underwear while recommending books to me.

Oh, and sidenote, Finn's essays were kind of genius. Kid is smart.

OH OH. Puck the math nerd = <3. Just remembered that. I don't even know what that mattice thing is, but I definitely want Puck to teach me it.

Anyway, hopefully this was slightly more concise than my usual rambly comments. Thankyou so much for writing this, it's definitely made my day better. <3

Re: So I actually tried to take notes this time

[alicebluegown16]

Thanks for commenting and I'm laughing at the fact that you took notes! It's kind of flattering and hilarious.

I loved writing my literature inspired porn and Finn learning about the joy of learning and him being such an adorkable insecure teenage boy in lurve.

And even though canon has apparently decided to crap all over my theory of secret!math dork Puck, I still will stubbornly cling to it.