Fic. Tie the Knot

[alicebluegown16]

Title: Tie the Knot
Author: alicebluegown16
Rating: NC-17
Paring: Will/Finn
Summary: Liking, wanting, needing.
AN: For the winn prompt meme: Established relationship. Tie kink. Bondage. Part of my series: The series in chronological order Adorable, Do Over, Breakfast of Champions, Like Grown Ups, Nice Boy, Complicated. , Need You to Need Me. (and I

Comments

[hermiones_twin]

I love all your fic, but this one was really awesome. I so totally identify with Will when he wants to be tied up when he's stressed. (My boyfriend doesn't quite get why it's a stress-reliever for me, but he's happy to comply.) You captured that particular sentiment really well, the "my day has sucked and I don't want to talk about it right now and I need this and then maybe I'll talk to you" sort of feeling. This was really really good.

[alicebluegown16]

Thank you so much for your wonderful comment.

This is my first attempt at writing anything remotely kinky and I'm relieved I got it right.

[momoda6]

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Ok, slight criticism first. Maybe I'm just tired but at the beginning the voice was kind of confusing. Like maybe you used he too often, and since they're both 'he' I wasn't sure who you were talking about. I don't know, the first few paragraphs I wasn't sure who liked it and who thought what. ._.;;

But once I had my bearings this was so awesome. What could have easily been really porny had basically no porn in it, and it was really just a tool to explore their relationship. The idea of coming home after a bad day and having that is just <3

[momoda6]

Thanks so much for all your awesome and honest feedback. You were totally right about the opening paragraphs being a bit unclear, so I fixed them and they seem to flow much better.

And also, damn it you made me care about the boy with the homework, so for you I have written a fix it fic and will be posting it soon.

I'm thrilled that you're noticing the way the relationship has evolved and Will and Finn are now on more equal footing since that's one of the main points I've been trying to weave into this series, that each is the other's sounding board, person they can lean on, and how they both get so much out of what they have.

As to future marriage /proposal yeah, it's totally part of my head canon and I hopefully will get to it eventually if this series didn't keep taking on a life of it's own and going in all kinds of directions I didn't plan. But hey, we know that somewhere down the line they end up with a kid, right?

[madmenfanatic]

Loved it. Also liked the idea of Will tying up Finn, but making Finn pleasure Will during it. Instead of the usual "I'm going to tie you up and do delicious things to you"" but "I am going to tie you up and make you do great things to ME". That was awesome.

But even hotter was Will saying "Tell me something shocking. Your dirtieist thought, wildest fantasy." Wow, what an opportunity!

[alicebluegown16]

Thank you.

And that particular scene w/ Finn tied up was one that played over and over in my mind for awhile.

It was very, very nice.

[lezi]

Loved this. Especially Will needing to be tied up and controlled every now and again, and Finn understanding and complying without complaint.

Brilliant job!

[alicebluegown16]

thank you.

It just seems very realistic for him. Or is it just me?