Fic. Tie the Knot
Title: Tie the Knot
Author: alicebluegown16
Rating: NC-17
Paring: Will/Finn
Summary: Liking, wanting, needing.
AN: For the winn prompt meme: Established relationship. Tie kink. Bondage. Part of my series: The series in chronological order Adorable, Do Over, Breakfast of Champions, Like Grown Ups, Nice Boy, Complicated. , Need You to Need Me. (and I ( Read more... )
Ok, slight criticism first. Maybe I'm just tired but at the beginning the voice was kind of confusing. Like maybe you used he too often, and since they're both 'he' I wasn't sure who you were talking about. I don't know, the first few paragraphs I wasn't sure who liked it and who thought what. ._.;;
But once I had my bearings this was so awesome. What could have easily been really porny had basically no porn in it, and it was really just a tool to explore their relationship. The idea of coming home after a bad day and having that is just <3.
AND OMG. THE STORY WITH THE BOY AND THE HOMEWORK JUST KILLED ME. I would not be against a Will/gay!kid/stupidstraight!kid fic (not in a slash way) because that totally just broke my heart and I kinda want to know that Will gave him awesome fatherly advice and that the kid's life is going to turn out okay. I dunno, get Will to invite him over to meet Finn or something to make him feel better, or he's going to be on my conscience. D:
I love how the age difference has now almost dissapeared, and Finn and Will are just equal now, and Finn gives Will advice and takes care of him when it probably used to just be the other way around.
And if this isn't a hint at an eventual proposal/wedding fic then I don't know what is. >.>
And seriously, I don't know if I've ever talked about fics convincing me I have kinks I don't actually have, but whenever someone writes a fic about the emotional side of tying up or leaving marks it convinces me that I could totally get into that. ._.;;
Um, so, yay. I'm not going to be surprised if I remember this whenever Will wears a tie now.
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And also, damn it you made me care about the boy with the homework, so for you I have written a fix it fic and will be posting it soon.
I'm thrilled that you're noticing the way the relationship has evolved and Will and Finn are now on more equal footing since that's one of the main points I've been trying to weave into this series, that each is the other's sounding board, person they can lean on, and how they both get so much out of what they have.
As to future marriage /proposal yeah, it's totally part of my head canon and I hopefully will get to it eventually if this series didn't keep taking on a life of it's own and going in all kinds of directions I didn't plan. But hey, we know that somewhere down the line they end up with a kid, right?
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