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May 28, 2010 21:35

APPLICATIONS ARE OPEN!Please, feel free to apply for a fandom or original character! The moderator will attempt to reply to applications promptly, but it may take more than a day due to various reasons in real life and out. Please be patient, but if you haven’t heard from the moderator in five days, then feel free to leave a message asking about ( Read more... )

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| Mercy Dyer | Application Part One | Original | blackhole_revel June 1 2010, 23:34:03 UTC
PLAYER INFORMATION

NAME: K
AGE: 23
LJ: [torncorpse]
AIM: squidded
EMAIL: somethingdiabolical@live.co.uk

CHARACTER INFORMATION

NAME: Mercy 'Vortex' Dyer
AGE: 23
FANDOM: Original

HISTORY: Taken pre-break out, while she's still a member of the Military

PERSONALITY: During her 'programming', Vortex was attentive, dedicated and followed orders to the letter. The cold, emotionless soldier programming made her formidable in her skills and pushed her through the limitations she previously had. However, when the program glitched, Mercy's own personality pushed through, breaking the cold soldier façade ( ... )

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| Mercy Dyer | Application Part Two | Original | blackhole_revel June 1 2010, 23:34:24 UTC
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FIRST PERSON: Can someone explain this to me? Because, I'm already with the military, and this is just a little different.

I think I missed another memo.

THIRD PERSON: Relatively speaking, it was a quiet assignment. Just Vortex with Flux. They hadn't been inhibited, the drugs foregone for this one mission and Mercy had instantly thought about fleeing. "Vortex," Flux's hissed word brought her back to now and she dismissed the idea ( ... )

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Re: | Mercy Dyer | Application Part Two | Original | houndours June 2 2010, 00:08:34 UTC

Accepted!Congratulations, you’ve been accepted into warglory! Welcome to the game, but before you pass go there are a few steps that have to be taken!

Reply to this comment to confirm your character’s journal.
Add soarnetworks, warglorylogs, wargloryooc, and warglory to your character’s journal.
Comment here with the appropriate information.
Finally, introduce yourself in the OOC community!

Once again, welcome to the game! Once there are some more players an AIM chat will be set up so everyone can get to know each other and interact. Please, keep in mind, the game is not starting until June 30th, but feel free to post any sort of memes or fun things you come across in the OOC community.

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blackhole_revel June 2 2010, 11:37:10 UTC
Character journal~

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buffyangellvr23 June 4 2010, 05:17:31 UTC
PLAYER INFORMATION

NAME: [Your name.] Mel
AGE: [Your age] 28
LJ: [“YOURLJHERE”] buffyangellvr23.livejournal.com
AIM: [Your aim.] knightangel1592 but I prefer Yahoo (sgt_buck_frobisher@yahoo.com) or MSN (fraserfanatic@hotmail.com)
EMAIL: [Your email.]

CHARACTER INFORMATION

NAME: [Character‘s full name.] Tobias Fangor
AGE: [If the age is unknown, just give us the approximate age.] Around 19
FANDOM: [The series you are taking him/her from. If it is an original character, just say so!] Animorphs

HISTORY:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tobias_%28Animorphs%29 (taken from "Ram the blade ship" at the tail end of the last book.)

PERSONALITY:Tobias's human element was something of a wimp, a bully magnet until things changed. He thinks more like a predator now, and his time as a warrior has hardened him. He is something of a loner, although he likes spending time with the people close to him-Rachel and Ax especially, but the others of the group too.He does have a weird ( ... )

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buffyangellvr23 June 4 2010, 05:17:45 UTC
POST 1 ( ... )

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houndours June 5 2010, 22:22:55 UTC

Accepted!Congratulations, you’ve been accepted into warglory! Welcome to the game, but before you pass go there are a few steps that have to be taken!

Reply to this comment to confirm your character’s journal.
Add soarnetworks, warglorylogs, wargloryooc, and warglory to your character’s journal.
Comment here with the appropriate information.
Finally, introduce yourself in the OOC community!

Once again, welcome to the game! Once there are some more players an AIM chat will be set up so everyone can get to know each other and interact. Please, keep in mind, the game is not starting until June 30th, but feel free to post any sort of memes or fun things you come across in the OOC community.

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Also, just out of curiosity, why are you using the little things used for coding for his speech? It made things a little hard to read.

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buffyangellvr23 June 6 2010, 02:57:24 UTC
It's what's generally used for thought-speech,even in the books. I could try something like () if it'd be easier to keep up with.

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Takeshi Yamamoto // Katekyo Hitman REBORN! // II electroplay June 9 2010, 00:00:44 UTC
In truth, Takeshi’s personality could almost be considered obsessive in its own right. He wraps himself around specific things and never strays from their influence. When he has set his mind on something, again, he is never swayed from it - dedicating much of his time and attention to it with a ferocity that’s almost frightening. Whether it be perfecting something he’s deemed a part of his identity or bettering himself to prove his worth to former opponents, once Takeshi has set his mind on something, that idiotic persona once more vanishes to give way to something darker though distinctly determined and unmovable.

Another flaw he finds himself with is an unwillingness to cause drastic harm to another. Should push come to shove, he’ll fight to protect himself and others. The idea, though, of dealing a serious - or even fatal - blow is something he seems adamant about never doing.

SAMPLES

FIRST PERSON: Maaa, maaa! I was wondering ( ... )

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houndours June 9 2010, 19:10:05 UTC

Accepted!Congratulations, you’ve been accepted into warglory! Welcome to the game, but before you pass go there are a few steps that have to be taken!

Reply to this comment to confirm your character’s journal.
Add soarnetworks, warglorylogs, wargloryooc, and warglory to your character’s journal.
Comment here with the appropriate information.
Finally, introduce yourself in the OOC community!

Once again, welcome to the game! Once there are some more players an AIM chat will be set up so everyone can get to know each other and interact. Please, keep in mind, the game is not starting until June 30th, but feel free to post any sort of memes or fun things you come across in the OOC community.

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asariugetsu June 12 2010, 20:13:25 UTC

tweedywatcher June 10 2010, 04:57:07 UTC
NAME: Mel ( ... )

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Giles 2 tweedywatcher June 10 2010, 04:57:23 UTC
THIRD PERSON ( ... )

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Rejected! houndours June 10 2010, 05:16:52 UTC
I regret to inform you that your application has been declined. If you have any questions regarding your rejection, please contact the moderator through the live journal messaging system. You are welcome to reapply for this character after a week's time!

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1/2 typophsyco June 16 2010, 03:51:36 UTC
PLAYER INFORMATION

NAME:Typo
AGE: 17
LJ: typophsyco
AIM: typophsyco
EMAIL:typophsyco@hotmail.com

CHARACTER INFORMATION

NAME: Miles Edgeworth
AGE: 24
FANDOM: Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney
TIMELINE: VERY beginning of the first game.

HISTORY:
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PERSONALITY: How to describe Miles. At this point and time, he's a cold, seemingly heartless bastard. His goal is to win at all costs. He will have perfection. To be perfect is the Von Karman way, and though he is not a Von Karma himself, his mentor is ( ... )

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2/2 typophsyco June 16 2010, 03:54:26 UTC
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FIRST PERSON:

What the hell!?

[There's silence for a moment before he clears his throat.]

This is Prosecutor Miles Edgeworth. Unless you want to spend the rest of your life in prison on the charges of kidnapping, I suggest you tell me where I am.

((I recycled this from the last app I did with Edgey. I can write a new one if you want, but I'm lazy ^_^". I can't imagine anything else he'd say upon arriving in a new place like this.))

THIRD PERSON: Edgeworth knew his message would be taken literally by most of the world. He wondered how people would react - what people would think of him after the discovery. He didn't care in the slightest, of course, but it was a subject that occupied his mind nonetheless ( ... )

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Request! houndours June 16 2010, 04:16:55 UTC
Before making a decision on your application, I'd like to ask you to review your personality section. Although you are taking him from the beginning of the game, he still has quite a bit of personality, and I don't quite see that you've captured all of it there. There are quite a few things that have happened to him in the past that shaped him to be what he is today. As a whole, I'd like for you to go into a bit more detail and give examples as to why he acts a certain way.

As for the third person sample, it would be appreciated if you could write something from his current timeline instead of recycling something that happens later on.

I wish you the best of luck! You have three days to complete the revisions if you so wish to do them.

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1/2 typophsyco June 16 2010, 04:57:37 UTC
Personality Revision: In order to properly explain Edgeworth, I'll have to talk about his past. So if you are worried about spoilers, don't read this ( ... )

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