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[houndours]

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[typophsyco]

PLAYER INFORMATION

NAME:Typo
AGE: 17
LJ: typophsyco
AIM: typophsyco
EMAIL:typophsyco@hotmail.com

CHARACTER INFORMATION

NAME: Miles Edgeworth
AGE: 24
FANDOM: Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney
TIMELINE: VERY beginning of the first game.

HISTORY:
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PERSONALITY: How to describe Miles. At this point and time, he's a cold, seemingly heartless bastard. His goal is to win at all costs. He will have perfection. To be perfect is the Von Karman way, and though he is not a Von Karma himself, his mentor is

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[typophsyco]

SAMPLES

FIRST PERSON:

What the hell!?

[There's silence for a moment before he clears his throat.]

This is Prosecutor Miles Edgeworth. Unless you want to spend the rest of your life in prison on the charges of kidnapping, I suggest you tell me where I am.

((I recycled this from the last app I did with Edgey. I can write a new one if you want, but I'm lazy ^_^". I can't imagine anything else he'd say upon arriving in a new place like this.))

THIRD PERSON: Edgeworth knew his message would be taken literally by most of the world. He wondered how people would react - what people would think of him after the discovery. He didn't care in the slightest, of course, but it was a subject that occupied his mind nonetheless

Request!

[houndours]

Before making a decision on your application, I'd like to ask you to review your personality section. Although you are taking him from the beginning of the game, he still has quite a bit of personality, and I don't quite see that you've captured all of it there. There are quite a few things that have happened to him in the past that shaped him to be what he is today. As a whole, I'd like for you to go into a bit more detail and give examples as to why he acts a certain way.

As for the third person sample, it would be appreciated if you could write something from his current timeline instead of recycling something that happens later on.

I wish you the best of luck! You have three days to complete the revisions if you so wish to do them.

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[typophsyco]

Personality Revision: In order to properly explain Edgeworth, I'll have to talk about his past. So if you are worried about spoilers, don't read this

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[typophsyco]

Third Person Revision: Miles Edgeworth stepped off the plane and onto the poorly ventilated gate that connected the aircraft to the building. Although he and the Von Karmas had flown private, the pilot had insisted they land in an actual airport. As he stepped into the terminal, he halfway expected to see a familiar face. After a brief glance around, he cursed himself for the foolish, fleeting hope. It had been over ten years since he had last been in an airport, and a lot had happened since then. Sure, he'd been taking cases in California for some time now, but they were simple and brief- not quite worthy of his attention, and he typically left soon after the case was complete. This time, however, he was in public. He didn't really expect anyone to recognize him. Not as Miles Edgeworth, at least. If they did, it was only from the papers announcing his return. He was famous, after all

Accepted!

[houndours]

Accepted!Congratulations, you’ve been accepted into warglory! Welcome to the game, but before you pass go there are a few steps that have to be taken!

Reply to this comment to confirm your character’s journal.
Add soarnetworks, warglorylogs, wargloryooc, and warglory to your character’s journal.
Comment here with the appropriate information.
Finally, introduce yourself in the OOC community!

Once again, welcome to the game! Once there are some more players an AIM chat will be set up so everyone can get to know each other and interact. Please, keep in mind, the game is not starting until July 20th, but feel free to post any sort of memes or fun things you come across in the OOC community.

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[demon_of_law]

Sorry this took so long! I'll have his profile and stuff filled out in no time!