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Jul 18, 2013 16:38

Sorry for the delay. Here is day four of “All In the Summary” week. The name is actually in the title and not the summary, but that combined with the actual summaries contents made me decide to include it with this week.

TITLE: Eva Winters
PERPETRATOR: shadowkat678
SUE-O-METER:

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ph - ravenclaw house, rating - toxic, pc - parasite sue, 0 - wank

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hogwartsvampxd July 20 2013, 19:08:25 UTC

hey pottersues.
i'm neeeewwww to live journal
i wrote a fanfiction called Voldie's Daughter
i heard u hate mary sues & i hate mary sues 2
Mary sues are such geeky nerds!!!!111
they have no life
i hope you like my story
just click on ma profile
love ya

yemi_hikari July 20 2013, 23:22:25 UTC

Obvious troll is obvious troll. If you aren't...

i heard u hate mary sues & i hate mary sues 2

We don't hate Mary Sues. We love them.

pottersues July 21 2013, 02:27:54 UTC

I'm freezing the thread and urging the minions to give you the attention you seem to be seeking.

anonymous July 20 2013, 20:25:25 UTC

Save me, please! *puppy dog eyes*

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3038000/1/Deceiving-Smiles-Part-1-Sirius-Black-Love-Story

anonymous July 23 2013, 07:51:29 UTC

( Serious question here... what eleven year old sits in their parents lap, particularly the lap of their mother whose likely a lot closer to them in size then their father. This is particularly true with an ill parent as well. )

And she's supposed to be a Ravenclaw. O.o

anonymous August 9 2013, 02:45:50 UTC

Hey, btw. This is my story and I have actually fixed stuff! Really. Do you realize how jerky this sounds. I Acually was going to try and apolagize to you but you cut off the connection. I have fixed a lot of things, the entire AN was put down the next day. No big summary, only about 1/6 of the size, I actually read a few of your story's and liked them. If you knew went back and read the new version maybe you would see I have tried to improve. I actually felt really bad about that and have recently tried to research as much as I can. I added things, took away her getting kicked out of the hospital, and fixed a lot of other stuff...why is midnight bad? And a Mary-sue is a perfect character good at everything with no flaws. One that is seemingly superhuman and two diminutional. I read a few help essays on mugglenet and rewrote a lot of stuff in my story. If you would check things out for yourself and see how I changed some of the stuff maybe you wouldn't be so quick to judge. I am pretty certain I looked up the literal definition of Mary ( ... )

yemi_hikari August 11 2013, 02:48:45 UTC

While it's nice that you've fixed stuff since we last talk you still have a long way to go ( ... )

anonymous September 8 2013, 21:28:59 UTC

It doesn't seem anything like what you said ( ... )

pottersues September 10 2013, 04:10:20 UTC

Let me make it clear that I know you're the same person who made the comment here.

http://pottersues.livejournal.com/850144.html?thread=71787744#t71787744

Thus I know you're the writer trying to pretend she's someone else. I also know because you are the writer that you know full well the whole sitting in the lap thing was there as you are the writer. I also know that you didn't find this site the other day, you found it almost a month ago. If you're telling us that "its interesting how she openly admitted to being defensive and I admire this writer for asking for help on getting better at taking this type of reviewing" you're also lying, because if this were true you wouldn't be trying to be someone else.

Believe me... I do have a way of knowing its the same person making comments despite said comments being anonymous. Let me also make it clear that doing a complete rewrite of the story doesn't negate the criticism recieved before said story ( ... )

afleur_de_lis September 11 2013, 03:57:30 UTC

I seriously think that you should stop trying to cause drama on this journal and on FFN. Not only are you making users on this journal uncomfortable about expressing their opinions freely, but you're also making users on FFN uncomfortable as well ( ... )

yemi_hikari September 11 2013, 04:56:59 UTC

I know if it was my story I would be mad if something like this was out there when I had put all that effort into making it better.

As you've already been told by pottersues there is a way for her to tell if anonymous comments are left by the same person, so we know that this particular story is your story. Why are you so insistent that past critique of your work should be edited, maybe even deleted just because you don't like the fact it exists? Not only do you not have the right to make such demands we have had other writers who have handled finding their stories here a lot more maturely and never threw a gasket about the fact the entries still existed after they improved their work.

The points you made before are still bad points. A lot of the critique still stands even though you have improved the story.

As for one of the reviewers saying that the wished no one wrote in first person, I find it a interesting way to write. You don't just see the outside, but from the characters prospective. It makes it a lot more detailed in my opinion and ( ... )

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