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[pottersues]

Sorry for the delay. Here is day four of “All In the Summary” week. The name is actually in the title and not the summary, but that combined with the actual summaries contents made me decide to include it with this week.

TITLE: Eva Winters
PERPETRATOR: shadowkat678
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Comments

[anonymous]

Hey, btw. This is my story and I have actually fixed stuff! Really. Do you realize how jerky this sounds. I Acually was going to try and apolagize to you but you cut off the connection. I have fixed a lot of things, the entire AN was put down the next day. No big summary, only about 1/6 of the size, I actually read a few of your story's and liked them. If you knew went back and read the new version maybe you would see I have tried to improve. I actually felt really bad about that and have recently tried to research as much as I can. I added things, took away her getting kicked out of the hospital, and fixed a lot of other stuff...why is midnight bad? And a Mary-sue is a perfect character good at everything with no flaws. One that is seemingly superhuman and two diminutional. I read a few help essays on mugglenet and rewrote a lot of stuff in my story. If you would check things out for yourself and see how I changed some of the stuff maybe you wouldn't be so quick to judge. I am pretty certain I looked up the literal definition of Mary

[yemi_hikari]

While it's nice that you've fixed stuff since we last talk you still have a long way to go