( Possible Trilogy!! XD )

I hate this chapter with a passion.  It isn't working, Piotr is out of character and David gets the pooh kicked out of him.  Any comments, suggestions, questions would be appreciated by any and all.  Do NOT be gentle, be honest--though, in all honesty, the grammar problems are the least of my worries.   ;P

Thank you in advance!

(This is only part of ( Read more... )

A little bit more ideas as they ran through my head...  I don't want this story to be romance with a little drama thrown in, I want action from the beginning....

Illyana Rasputin - Called Winter or Snowflake in the story.  She is also 18 in the story.  Bold, blonde, bombshell.  She is a natural shielder.  She and Katherine (the clone) were good ( Read more... )

So as not to confuse myself any further....  The dates are meaningless, I'm just trying to keep up with their ages.  I think I messed up on Illyana's age, but since the story is already written with her being 15 and Piotr being 29 (or implied being 29)... ah well...

Disclaimer: Characters are Marvel's, except Zilya.  This is not Marvel's timeline, ( Read more... )

The Warrior with No Name Scene 22 is posted.
Husband didn't beta, so I hope it's okay.

The Warrior with No Name - So, Rescue... 

I should be the first to say that I reeeeeally hate magic.  I'm a science fiction writer.  But I've been setting this up slowly in Warrior, so, heh, we'll see how it turns out.  Magic abounds here.  Joy of joy-joys.

Here are some ideas for the sequel to The Warrior with No Name:

1. Limbo is obviously the land with no name as Illyana hasn't taken the ( Read more... )

Chapter 16 posted. Actually got some plotting done and answered a few questions.

The Warrior with No Name - Is the Hero a Moose or a Bear?

I may take a break for a few days and spend time with hubby or write some on my original fiction story.  He's been complaining that I haven't written enough on Tryphonius.