fic for kaminikaku

[formation_akame]

Title: Jishin 311
Author: shirayuki1582
Pairing: Kame/Jin
Word Count: 10,675
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: none
Notes: This is based on and inspired by true events and people. I adjusted it as far as necessary to go with the story. I recognize the delicacy of the topic but there is no offence intended and it was written with the outmost respect for anyone involved

Comments

[jayeanne]

this is so lovely. ;____; I loved how you interspersed scenes from ordinary people with theirs. <3

[shirayuki1582]

You were the first to comment! :D Thank you so much for giving my fanfic a chance by reading it and writing a comment ♥ I'm glad you liked the way I set it up and that it moved you. :)

[moon_catcher]

I must say that I wasn't sure whether it's already the time to write (and thus read) about the last year's events or not, but I decided to give this fic a chance anyway. And I'm glad I did, really

[shirayuki1582]

Reading your comment I felt really touched (because in some way you're my senpai in writing and especially bc it was coming from you) and it probably means that I have been able to improve my expressive abilities at least a bit in the mean time

[bellemelody]

I'm just speechless! I can't find right words to say what I feel. This fic made me cry and feel so sad, thinking about disaster and about the faces I saw on TV, thinking how people are brave dealing and surviving and finding a courage to smile and to believe.
This topic is very sensitive and that you decide to write about it, I just feel respect to you and the way you wrote it, like a chonicle, bitter, sad, hopless, powerless and with the scene, when girl listening to song, I was crying so hard on that moment.

This is all bigger than them and he just lets it go.

this is how it was, it bigger that them, bigger and scarrier that anything and I like how you add Akame line here, because I can't say, that this story is about Akame, this story is bigger than them and you show it perfectly.

Thank you

[shirayuki1582]

Writing about this had been a real challenge and if I hadn't had friends, who encouraged me in the process maybe I wouldn't have been able to finish it because it's been so hard on me emotionally. Also, I had been very nervous because I barely have experience in writing fanfics or anything really and then choosing this, it was quite something. But I'm so glad I pulled through with and that you could feel all the emotions and work I put into it! Even though I'm sorry I made you cry, it still means that I was able to move people with this through my own emotions and maybe let the readers find closure in some sort of way. There's no path past this day last March without sadness or tears. I was worried people would miss the Akame in this but they have their story like everybody else on that day and as you said, it was about so much more than just them. I'm glad my readers could naturally accept that fact. Thank you so much for reading this and commenting! ♥ I know it's a heavy topic so I appreciate each comment even more :)

[rydion9]

this fic is really beautifully written, it has mixed emotions in it, confuse, sad, mad, and everything
and.. anon-san, the way you wrote it with a wide range of perspective (do i make sense? XD), i love it
the last part
Tokyo, Japan (May 19th 2011) section got me teary :')
thank you anon-san for writing this ♥

[shirayuki1582]

I agree that this fic is full of emotions >.< Sometimes I had to take a break from writing it because it made me all sad and exhausted because of the heaviness of the topic! And you do make perfect sense, thank you for seeing it this way! I'm glad I was able to portray the events this way because there's so many stories at fates of people chained to the events of March 11th 2011 and it needs a big kind of perspective. Thank you so much for commenting and liking this ♥

[kaminikaku]

OHHHHH Fic for me! Thanks for writing this for me, I appreciate the work that you have put into it. I think you chose a very difficult subject to base this fic on, and I would like to congratulate you for handing it with sensitivity and respect for the "real" people involved

[shirayuki1582]

I was really really nervous about you submitting the fic for you (because I'm only a beginner with writing) but I was happy you did read it and commented! ♥To be honest, I was a bit nervous when I got the assignment because you seemed to like all the things I've never tried to write before. Non-AU above all. It took me quite a while to figure out what I wanted to write about and that's in the end the most Non-AU I was capable of