Out of Choices - Chapter 15

[jcaddict]

Title: Out Of Choices
Chapter 15: Rubicon (Previous Chapters: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14)
Author:JCAddict/picklewinkle/Sher
Fandom: Twilight
Word Count: 4,804
Rating: R/M, for sex and language
Story Summary: An angry young woman is forced to move to the town of Forks, Washington and decides that alone is the best way to be. She

Comments

[hairsprayx12]

*just stays down on the floor and drools*

[jcaddict]

Get back up here sillyhead!

[belladeluna]

I'm just going to read this chapter over and over... and drool over and over. Very well written! I'm a bio major myself and I've now rekindled my love for it.

[jcaddict]

Tee hee, I love that you loved it for the bio aspect. I sat there writing it and I could feel my inner geek taking over *snorts* Thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked it.

I adore your icon. So cute!

[jaymza]

Hi, I'm from Italy, 26 years old.
I'm reading Out of choices and in 2 days I'm at 20th chapter... that means that I like it very much. good job!

at the moment, this is my favourite chapter because it's HOT! I love Twilight but, unfortunately for me, I'm older than the normal audience and I think that there's a lack of some good sensuality (for not to say sex :P)
I'm at home bacause I'm pregnant and a dose of hormones is what I need :D

compliments for this sentence:
"I bet Edward really was actually capable of giving a girl an orgasm just by speaking. The thought of him talking dirty combined with his perfectly sexy voice made me shudder."

Sorry for my poor english :)

[jcaddict]

Hi Camilla. I'm Sher. It's nice to meet you. Your English isn't poor at all! I'm very impressed! I am even older than you so I was definitely not in the target audience for Twilight either! Congratulations on your pregnancy and I hope that you're feeling well.

I think this story might be just what you need for your hormones LOL. I never liked that Stephenie Meyer avoided their physical relationship, but then again, like we've both pointed out, we aren't target audience aged. I am definitely not avoiding it and intend to make their relationship sexual in this story.

I'm so pleased you're enjoying the story and please feel free to leave me a comment any time. I loved reading your thoughts!

[jaymza]

My english are improving also reading your story, so, thank you for make me doing practice :D

ok, I'll keep you update on my thoughts, now I return to the reading :)

[optimistic4ever]

The more I read your stories Sher, the more in awe I am of your talent. I am a new Twilight fan because of you