They Met and Parted (part 2)

Jun 25, 2008 15:43

Title: They Met and Parted
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freepureangel June 25 2008, 15:37:17 UTC
uwahhhhhhhhhh

TEGOSHI DIED.
YOU KILLED TEOGSHI.

YOU -- *points*

*jaw drops*
*sobs*
*is unable to talk/type properly*

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heiryzmylisza June 26 2008, 04:57:48 UTC
aaawww... tegoshi looks like an angel in your icon ne?
i'm so sorry for what i did!!!
erm... i'm just on the emo mode!!! lol.XD

anyway, tissue?

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setsuna_31 June 25 2008, 16:38:28 UTC
Uwaaaa!!!!!
You killed Tesshi!!!
But its fine. Forgiven.
Your birthday is near, ne.
Im crying right now.
Tegoshi shouldn't deserve this right? You're emo, Tesshi's emo and I'm emo too.

Wah~~~ Im so guilty right now either.

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heiryzmylisza June 26 2008, 04:59:17 UTC
lol... everybody's emo once in a while!
yeah... i guess now's my time ne?
ahahaha....

why are you feeling guilty?
*gasp* you did something to tesshi too?

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setsuna_31 June 26 2008, 06:53:39 UTC
Yeah. Just for once, ne?

Haven't you received my text yesterday? >_

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keeconk June 25 2008, 17:32:46 UTC
“But I love Massu and he’s so sweet that he gives me cavities,”
he gave me cavities too!!

okay.. the fun stopped there.. for the rest of the fic i was like.. omg! omg! omg! omg! omg!

i dunnoe wat to say.. this is really good.. it's not the typical massutego fluffy fanfiction..

awesome! me like it!!

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heiryzmylisza June 26 2008, 05:02:21 UTC
massu gives us all cavities!!! XP
ahaha... that's why my dentist is having a headache!!! lol.

erm... i thought that my fics are going like stereotype...
so i decided to make something different!!!

yeay!!! glad you liked it!!!

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annex0083 June 25 2008, 18:16:43 UTC
:O
This is pretty different from your standard stuff, I like it

Too bad :( I wish they could be together

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heiryzmylisza June 26 2008, 05:14:49 UTC
it's a birthday special! that's why!!! ahihi...

aww... don't worry!!! i'll write something fluffy to compromise this!!!

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hanasim June 25 2008, 19:06:31 UTC
OMG OMG OMG A LONG LONG TEGOMASS FIC!!!! And it's NC-17 again?! Kyaaaa~

Nooooo but I have classes now and I gotta run omg talk about bad timing T______T

I promise I shall read this as soon as I get home and comment endlessly on it lol.

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hanasim June 26 2008, 03:55:19 UTC
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OMG THIS IS REALLY REALLY GOOD. I love it so much I shall now um spam you with the parts I liked lol XDDD

Tegoshi Yuya… Masuda thought and then the softest gust of wind blew Tegoshi’s hair away from his pretty face and Masuda knew he was in love.

omg I like this like line, the scene feels so ethereal and I just love the simplicity of it. No need for endless conversations or internal debating, just suddenly realizing and admitting to it =D

...and shouting in pain as he almost dislocated his head from his neck. “Tegoshi!!! That’s more than just a one word sentence!!!” Masuda exclaimed...

LOL so Tegoshi is practically mute half the time lol and Massu is just bubbling with cuteness here as him fumbles he way through an actual conversation with Tegoshi =P

Tegoshi just nodded because their P.E. teacher spotted them talking and told them to do 30 push-ups

rofl that was random. reminds me of my younger days XD

It was just Massu who persuaded him to go using his irresistible puppy eyes complete ( ... )

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heiryzmylisza June 26 2008, 05:37:45 UTC
OMG!!! i woke up to find this and i truly love you for giving me this!!!

ILU for spamming my page like this... chuuu~!!! ^o^

i like the soft wind part too!!!
i mean, for me, i think it just seems so natural for massu to realize he's in love with tesshi just like that ne?

and massu pouting!!! i can't believe people don't realize how cute massu would look like if he's pouting too!!! come on!!! with that kissable lips? maybe he's even better than tegoshi!!! *gets shot*

i'm really really glad you like this ne?

lol... i promise to write you one emo fic okay?
there are plot bunnies on my mind at work already!!! ^_______^

ahaha... well, good news for me!!! lmao. XD

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hanasim June 26 2008, 09:57:35 UTC
Falling in love so naturally is most definitely the sweetest^^

And Massu would be super adorable if he pouts I agree omg his cheeks are so pinch-able XD and his lips is the 2nd nicest in NEWS after Pi lol. Ahhh, even better than Tegoshi?! Probably lol in different ways maybe. Tego's pout kinda makes you go all ~kawaii~ and gives in to whatever he wants whereas if MASSU were to pout I would probably go KYA!!! and glomp him in a second and never let go leaving him no opportunity to state his wishes whatsoever ahahaha XD

And yay for more fics!!! *happy*

Then I should so comment on your fics more so you'll have more inspiration and motivation to write XD

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