They Met and Parted (part 2)

Jun 25, 2008 15:43

Title: They Met and Parted
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hanasim June 25 2008, 19:06:31 UTC
OMG OMG OMG A LONG LONG TEGOMASS FIC!!!! And it's NC-17 again?! Kyaaaa~

Nooooo but I have classes now and I gotta run omg talk about bad timing T______T

I promise I shall read this as soon as I get home and comment endlessly on it lol.

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hanasim June 26 2008, 03:55:19 UTC
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OMG THIS IS REALLY REALLY GOOD. I love it so much I shall now um spam you with the parts I liked lol XDDD

Tegoshi Yuya… Masuda thought and then the softest gust of wind blew Tegoshi’s hair away from his pretty face and Masuda knew he was in love.

omg I like this like line, the scene feels so ethereal and I just love the simplicity of it. No need for endless conversations or internal debating, just suddenly realizing and admitting to it =D

...and shouting in pain as he almost dislocated his head from his neck. “Tegoshi!!! That’s more than just a one word sentence!!!” Masuda exclaimed...

LOL so Tegoshi is practically mute half the time lol and Massu is just bubbling with cuteness here as him fumbles he way through an actual conversation with Tegoshi =P

Tegoshi just nodded because their P.E. teacher spotted them talking and told them to do 30 push-ups

rofl that was random. reminds me of my younger days XD

It was just Massu who persuaded him to go using his irresistible puppy eyes complete ( ... )

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heiryzmylisza June 26 2008, 05:37:45 UTC
OMG!!! i woke up to find this and i truly love you for giving me this!!!

ILU for spamming my page like this... chuuu~!!! ^o^

i like the soft wind part too!!!
i mean, for me, i think it just seems so natural for massu to realize he's in love with tesshi just like that ne?

and massu pouting!!! i can't believe people don't realize how cute massu would look like if he's pouting too!!! come on!!! with that kissable lips? maybe he's even better than tegoshi!!! *gets shot*

i'm really really glad you like this ne?

lol... i promise to write you one emo fic okay?
there are plot bunnies on my mind at work already!!! ^_______^

ahaha... well, good news for me!!! lmao. XD

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hanasim June 26 2008, 09:57:35 UTC
Falling in love so naturally is most definitely the sweetest^^

And Massu would be super adorable if he pouts I agree omg his cheeks are so pinch-able XD and his lips is the 2nd nicest in NEWS after Pi lol. Ahhh, even better than Tegoshi?! Probably lol in different ways maybe. Tego's pout kinda makes you go all ~kawaii~ and gives in to whatever he wants whereas if MASSU were to pout I would probably go KYA!!! and glomp him in a second and never let go leaving him no opportunity to state his wishes whatsoever ahahaha XD

And yay for more fics!!! *happy*

Then I should so comment on your fics more so you'll have more inspiration and motivation to write XD

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heiryzmylisza June 26 2008, 11:14:30 UTC
i totally agree with you!!! ^______^

ahaha... i also had the same thoughts about massu!!! i said if i ever meet him in person, i'd probably pinch his cheeks first!!! lol. fangirl attack!!! XD. anyway, yeah, tegoshi's uber adorable and massu... is... erm...*at a loss for words*... just cute and everything in synonym with that word!!! ahaha...

yeah, you should probably do that ne?

aaacckkk... massu's bday is near!!! gotta work on my fic again!!!

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