HI!

If you're here for my fanfiction, and you have some time to spare, would you give me any of the following:

a) concrit 
b) tips on overcoming writers' block
c) prompts

IP logging is off, anons are welcome.

Thanks!

Title:                          Night Sounds
Author:                     chokingsmoker
Pairing, Threesome:Ohmiya (Ohno Satoshi and Ninomiya Kazunari), Sakurai Sho with Aiba Masaki with Matsumoto Jun
Rating:                       NC-17
Word Count:             1,601
Disclaimer:                Not for profit. Fiction.
Notes:                        Written for lilly0  for the ( Read more... )

Title:                A Very Short Visit
Author:          chokingsmoker
Pairing:          Matsumoto Jun (嵐) and Hyde (L'Arc~en~Ciel)
Rating:           PG 
Disclaimer:     Not for profit. Fiction.
Summary:      Jun visits Hyde backstage after a L'arc concert.
Word Count: 771
Notes:            Written for lilly0 for the  Fund-Raising Project for the Habagat Victims @ je_philippines. She ( Read more... )

Title:              Just Another Kiss
Author:         chokingsmoker
Pairing:          Ohmiya (Ohno Satoshi and Ninomiya Kazunari)
Rating:           R
Disclaimer:    Not for profit. Fiction.
Word Count: 1,200
Summary:      Nino gets, uhm, nervous?
Notes:            aatash's translation and narration of the June 19 2008 Fukuoka concert was used for this fic (Thanks, Aki!). ( Read more... )

Title:                           What Happens During Costume Changes?
Author:                      chokingsmoker
Rating:                       NC-17
Disclaimer:                Not for profit. Fiction.
Pairing, Threesome: Ohmiya (Ohno Satoshi and Ninomiya Kazunari), Sakurai Sho with Aiba Masaki with Matsumoto Jun
Word Count:             1,501
Summary:                  ( Read more... )

Title: The Fic Where Sho Makes Leader Eat Ramen
Author:  ( Read more... )

It's Hard Out Here for a Pimp

Arashi is cooped up in a conference room with a few other people, managers and publicists, discussing damage control. That none of the higher ups are around bodes well and yet, Arashi is silent, except for occasional words from Sho and some sounds of agreement from Jun. Kazunari and Masaki look so serious, as if nothing ( Read more... )

Title:               Just Another Rainy Morning
Author:         chokingsmoker
Rating:           NC - 17
Disclaimer:    Not for profit. Fiction.
Pairing:          Yama (Ohno Satoshi and Sakurai Sho)
Word Count: 1,794
Summary:      Satoshi and Sakurai spend a rainy morning together. That’s it. Plot? What’s that? :P

( Sho feels the cool light breeze caress his cheek as he wakes up to the tap-tap-tap of light steady rain. )

"Naruse-san. You have a visitor."

Naruse's gaze flickered up once from his papers. "Send him in."

His secretary bowed stiffly -- still nervous, like a startled sparrow -- and hurriedly ushered a small man in, before shutting the heavy door behind her.

Silence, save for the quiet ticks of the clock on the wall.

Naruse perused the last page of his ( Read more... )

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