Yaaayyy!!!! Congratulation for finishing this fic. I haven't read this fic yet, but soon, I hope I can spare my time to read them. Hehehhe. THANK YOU SO MUCH for sharing this.
Yup, it's been a long road with this story and I'm so happy and so sad in the same time for finishing it TT______TT Oh, you haven't read it yet? *chuckles* Then I hope you'll like it :P
I'm staining your fic with my tears.... hope you don't mind
This is going to be a LONG comment, and because Mom dragged me out of the house half way through, it took me forever to read! Was wroth it
but OMG!!!! How could I hate you for this?? It was... it was... beautiful! (in a rather red tinted twisted way, but beautiful none the less)
OMG Kame topped Jin!! I know the last chapter I mentioned hoping that it would happen, but I didn't actually think it would happen! Kinda happy that it did.
Was eating when I read Pi getting his tongue cut... bad timing on my part...
God it was intense!! And Kame's insanity and everything was so well written that I could actually feel it >.From the moment Kame called Jin to come to his dads, I totally guessed that he had killed his dad, but I thought he would kill Jin when he arrived and then commit suicide then
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but OMG!!!! How could I hate you for this?? It was... it was... beautiful! (in a rather red tinted twisted way, but beautiful none the less) Well, it seems some people like to put the accent on the twisted part even if it should have been kind of predictable at this point :P I'm really, really happy that you think this way because Addictive Obsession is one of my treasures and one of my favorites stories that I've ever written and I'm a very hard to please personKazuya had to top Jin to give him back the confidence that he had lost when he had put his life and whole existence into Jin's hands. It was the very first scene that I've thought of where Jin was the bottom actually and after writing and seeing Jin as the seme for so long, it was a bit hard for me to view him as the uke now. When writing it though, it just came natural, like the exchange of lines between them at that point
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I've had that last line in mind since the moment we decided on the title *____* I felt like, this whole story should be centered around something like this as we both wanted to present a sick story, one where cruel and maddening things happen and where nothing can save you - you're too crazy to be saved after all
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I totally agree, this whole sentence is enough to sum up their relationship (for those who read the fic, at least xD) <3
Yes, Jin couldn't kill Pi, that would change everything he had been doing until now, imo. I actually adore it when I read scenes where one is marking the other, so I didn't feel the need to comment on what Jin did to Kame <3 But what he did to Pi was indeed surprising, you used that element really greatly.
I agree. Fics that show all sides of human nature are usually better and more realistic and I say it again, you did great. I wish my fics were as good as this xD It's not that I wasn't able to survive some scenes, because I'm actually craving for them xD It's just that lately, for reasons I don't know, I'm not reading as many Akame fics as I used to, so even when I saw this updated, I wasn't that motivated to read it, but like I said, I don't regret forcing myself,because it was always worth it :)
Actually, I had been reading some of your fics at some point and I really liked the idea of... 'Not the same' I think it was called. Your ideas on human nature are pretty good, but you don't describe them enough :P You don't show their pain, their emotions, we can't know the characters as if we, the readers, were them, but exactly like we're reading about them. The scene with Pi in this chapter is pretty long and we took care to show each detail in even more details so that you could sense Jin's madness, Kazuya's desperation and Pi's trust. When you write such scenes, it's something like - bam! he's dead. So just write more and it will be fine :P Sorry for babbling though xDD
Yup, there's a new community where he'll be posting our new stories. It's still not finished, but in a week or so we're going to be posting the new story there ^^ The link for Addictive Time is before the beginning of the chapter :P
wow! what an ending... T_________T it breaks my heart to see them end up being killed but then this is i think an appropriate ending for this story... i'm happy that they are still together even after what had happened.. :)
thank you for sharing this and congratulations! XD
Yup, in the end, after all that had happened and all that they did, they couldn't be happy together. Those five years had been like an illusion, something to show them that things could have been different if they had just met in different circumstances.
I think they'll always be together, no matter where they are xDDD Their addictive obsession is over, but their love will always live <3
Thank you so much for reading it till the end!! Hope you'll check our next stories too~~
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because I nearly screamed when I saw the update!!!!!
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This is going to be a LONG comment, and because Mom dragged me out of the house half way through, it took me forever to read! Was wroth it
but OMG!!!! How could I hate you for this?? It was... it was... beautiful! (in a rather red tinted twisted way, but beautiful none the less)
OMG Kame topped Jin!! I know the last chapter I mentioned hoping that it would happen, but I didn't actually think it would happen! Kinda happy that it did.
Was eating when I read Pi getting his tongue cut... bad timing on my part...
God it was intense!! And Kame's insanity and everything was so well written that I could actually feel it >.From the moment Kame called Jin to come to his dads, I totally guessed that he had killed his dad, but I thought he would kill Jin when he arrived and then commit suicide then ( ... )
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Well, it seems some people like to put the accent on the twisted part even if it should have been kind of predictable at this point :P I'm really, really happy that you think this way because Addictive Obsession is one of my treasures and one of my favorites stories that I've ever written and I'm a very hard to please personKazuya had to top Jin to give him back the confidence that he had lost when he had put his life and whole existence into Jin's hands. It was the very first scene that I've thought of where Jin was the bottom actually and after writing and seeing Jin as the seme for so long, it was a bit hard for me to view him as the uke now. When writing it though, it just came natural, like the exchange of lines between them at that point ( ... )
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Yes, Jin couldn't kill Pi, that would change everything he had been doing until now, imo. I actually adore it when I read scenes where one is marking the other, so I didn't feel the need to comment on what Jin did to Kame <3 But what he did to Pi was indeed surprising, you used that element really greatly.
I agree. Fics that show all sides of human nature are usually better and more realistic and I say it again, you did great. I wish my fics were as good as this xD It's not that I wasn't able to survive some scenes, because I'm actually craving for them xD It's just that lately, for reasons I don't know, I'm not reading as many Akame fics as I used to, so even when I saw this updated, I wasn't that motivated to read it, but like I said, I don't regret forcing myself,because it was always worth it :)
You have a community? :D
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Yup, there's a new community where he'll be posting our new stories. It's still not finished, but in a week or so we're going to be posting the new story there ^^ The link for Addictive Time is before the beginning of the chapter :P
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it breaks my heart to see them end up being killed but then this is i think an appropriate ending for this story...
i'm happy that they are still together even after what had happened.. :)
thank you for sharing this and congratulations! XD
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I think they'll always be together, no matter where they are xDDD Their addictive obsession is over, but their love will always live <3
Thank you so much for reading it till the end!! Hope you'll check our next stories too~~
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but yes they'll always be together no matter what, no matter where... XD
i'm looking forward to future stories from you guys.. :)
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