I'm staining your fic with my tears.... hope you don't mind
This is going to be a LONG comment, and because Mom dragged me out of the house half way through, it took me forever to read! Was wroth it
but OMG!!!! How could I hate you for this?? It was... it was... beautiful! (in a rather red tinted twisted way, but beautiful none the less)
OMG Kame topped Jin!! I know the last chapter I mentioned hoping that it would happen, but I didn't actually think it would happen! Kinda happy that it did.
Was eating when I read Pi getting his tongue cut... bad timing on my part...
God it was intense!! And Kame's insanity and everything was so well written that I could actually feel it >.From the moment Kame called Jin to come to his dads, I totally guessed that he had killed his dad, but I thought he would kill Jin when he arrived and then commit suicide then
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but OMG!!!! How could I hate you for this?? It was... it was... beautiful! (in a rather red tinted twisted way, but beautiful none the less) Well, it seems some people like to put the accent on the twisted part even if it should have been kind of predictable at this point :P I'm really, really happy that you think this way because Addictive Obsession is one of my treasures and one of my favorites stories that I've ever written and I'm a very hard to please personKazuya had to top Jin to give him back the confidence that he had lost when he had put his life and whole existence into Jin's hands. It was the very first scene that I've thought of where Jin was the bottom actually and after writing and seeing Jin as the seme for so long, it was a bit hard for me to view him as the uke now. When writing it though, it just came natural, like the exchange of lines between them at that point
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It wasn't that predictable. Everytime I thought "Ah, Jin got his way" or "Kame finally put his foot down" you manage to throw everything back in my face and throw in a bit of a twist! I loved it!
I can imagine switching roles of Seme and Uke for Jin must have been hard. But I'm glad you wrote it so naturally, it would have been sad if it came out forced :( but it came out amazing.
I'm glad you gave them a chance like that, they really deserved it.
Hmm, interesting way of making them disappear. Keeping it a secret of what really happened is good, adds some mystery and imagination.
because I nearly screamed when I saw the update!!!!!
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This is going to be a LONG comment, and because Mom dragged me out of the house half way through, it took me forever to read! Was wroth it
but OMG!!!! How could I hate you for this?? It was... it was... beautiful! (in a rather red tinted twisted way, but beautiful none the less)
OMG Kame topped Jin!! I know the last chapter I mentioned hoping that it would happen, but I didn't actually think it would happen! Kinda happy that it did.
Was eating when I read Pi getting his tongue cut... bad timing on my part...
God it was intense!! And Kame's insanity and everything was so well written that I could actually feel it >.From the moment Kame called Jin to come to his dads, I totally guessed that he had killed his dad, but I thought he would kill Jin when he arrived and then commit suicide then ( ... )
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Well, it seems some people like to put the accent on the twisted part even if it should have been kind of predictable at this point :P I'm really, really happy that you think this way because Addictive Obsession is one of my treasures and one of my favorites stories that I've ever written and I'm a very hard to please personKazuya had to top Jin to give him back the confidence that he had lost when he had put his life and whole existence into Jin's hands. It was the very first scene that I've thought of where Jin was the bottom actually and after writing and seeing Jin as the seme for so long, it was a bit hard for me to view him as the uke now. When writing it though, it just came natural, like the exchange of lines between them at that point ( ... )
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I can imagine switching roles of Seme and Uke for Jin must have been hard. But I'm glad you wrote it so naturally, it would have been sad if it came out forced :( but it came out amazing.
I'm glad you gave them a chance like that, they really deserved it.
Hmm, interesting way of making them disappear. Keeping it a secret of what really happened is good, adds some mystery and imagination.
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