but OMG!!!! How could I hate you for this?? It was... it was... beautiful! (in a rather red tinted twisted way, but beautiful none the less) Well, it seems some people like to put the accent on the twisted part even if it should have been kind of predictable at this point :P I'm really, really happy that you think this way because Addictive Obsession is one of my treasures and one of my favorites stories that I've ever written and I'm a very hard to please person
Kazuya had to top Jin to give him back the confidence that he had lost when he had put his life and whole existence into Jin's hands. It was the very first scene that I've thought of where Jin was the bottom actually and after writing and seeing Jin as the seme for so long, it was a bit hard for me to view him as the uke now. When writing it though, it just came natural, like the exchange of lines between them at that point ^^
We thought that we should give them a glimpse to what happiness means for normal people xDD It was a chance for Jin to also see the real Kazuya, the one that was afraid and was hurt by simple things, not that would bicker with someone that had just threatened him like he had done when he had first met Jin. Jin needed this to realize that he had been kind of fucked up and that Kazuya had been right - they should have run away earlier, not when it was too late T_____T
I was also anxiously waiting for the moment when Jin would confess everything to Kazuya. He's not a bad guy at all, he had just had a bad childhood and evil influences. It hadn't been a choice for him, like it hadn't been for Kazuya either, and I really wanted to portrait him like a vulnerable person because he had been like this all the time - afraid that he'll lose Kazuya, scared that he'll end up alone and frightened that he might lose everything and everyone he cared about.
I'm glad that you've started this story and I hope that we'll see at our other stories that we're going to be posting soon on our community ^^ Still multi-chapters though :P
Hmm... the part where their bodies went missing doesn't really have an explanation and it's intended to be like that. Maybe they are still alive, maybe Ryo had come to take them or maybe just a lunatic had stolen them. You'll never know and we'll never tell *hides herself*
Thank you so much for reading and for your long comment! Words like yours have the gift of encouraging the writers more than you think <3
It wasn't that predictable. Everytime I thought "Ah, Jin got his way" or "Kame finally put his foot down" you manage to throw everything back in my face and throw in a bit of a twist! I loved it!
I can imagine switching roles of Seme and Uke for Jin must have been hard. But I'm glad you wrote it so naturally, it would have been sad if it came out forced :( but it came out amazing.
I'm glad you gave them a chance like that, they really deserved it.
Hmm, interesting way of making them disappear. Keeping it a secret of what really happened is good, adds some mystery and imagination.
Well, it seems some people like to put the accent on the twisted part even if it should have been kind of predictable at this point :P I'm really, really happy that you think this way because Addictive Obsession is one of my treasures and one of my favorites stories that I've ever written and I'm a very hard to please person
Kazuya had to top Jin to give him back the confidence that he had lost when he had put his life and whole existence into Jin's hands. It was the very first scene that I've thought of where Jin was the bottom actually and after writing and seeing Jin as the seme for so long, it was a bit hard for me to view him as the uke now. When writing it though, it just came natural, like the exchange of lines between them at that point ^^
We thought that we should give them a glimpse to what happiness means for normal people xDD It was a chance for Jin to also see the real Kazuya, the one that was afraid and was hurt by simple things, not that would bicker with someone that had just threatened him like he had done when he had first met Jin. Jin needed this to realize that he had been kind of fucked up and that Kazuya had been right - they should have run away earlier, not when it was too late T_____T
I was also anxiously waiting for the moment when Jin would confess everything to Kazuya. He's not a bad guy at all, he had just had a bad childhood and evil influences. It hadn't been a choice for him, like it hadn't been for Kazuya either, and I really wanted to portrait him like a vulnerable person because he had been like this all the time - afraid that he'll lose Kazuya, scared that he'll end up alone and frightened that he might lose everything and everyone he cared about.
I'm glad that you've started this story and I hope that we'll see at our other stories that we're going to be posting soon on our community ^^ Still multi-chapters though :P
Hmm... the part where their bodies went missing doesn't really have an explanation and it's intended to be like that. Maybe they are still alive, maybe Ryo had come to take them or maybe just a lunatic had stolen them. You'll never know and we'll never tell *hides herself*
Thank you so much for reading and for your long comment! Words like yours have the gift of encouraging the writers more than you think <3
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I can imagine switching roles of Seme and Uke for Jin must have been hard. But I'm glad you wrote it so naturally, it would have been sad if it came out forced :( but it came out amazing.
I'm glad you gave them a chance like that, they really deserved it.
Hmm, interesting way of making them disappear. Keeping it a secret of what really happened is good, adds some mystery and imagination.
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