asdfghjkkjhgfds let me just say how suitable the last sentence is, how perfect for a closure *___*
I'm not sure how this comment will turn out, but I'll do my best. First, I was extremely shocked with what Jin did to Yamapi. I admit, I expected to see many things in this fic, but definitely not this one. I wasn't sure how I should react to that, I can't say I liked it, but at least it was Jin-like. I felt really sorry for Kazuya, though. I still feel like he didn't deserve any of what happened to him, but that's just me xD
Their relationship was sick and twisted and went beyond limits, but damn, I'd be lying if I said I wasn't ok with that xD Because I love situations where things go that far and a severe solution is needed. I didn't expect Kame to forget all those things they did, but at least I knew about his state because I had recently seen it in some TV series in my country xD The exact same symptoms, so it helped :) I knew the fic wouldn't end unless he remembered them, though and I feel like I was waiting all this time for those last scenes, the last meeting between Kame and Jin. I think it was pretty obvious from the beginning that they were so addicted to each other that one would have to go in the end. Though let me just admit that killing both is even better ;) It's always better in those kind of fics and you did a great job at portraying it. Jin's reaction was exactly what I wanted, it just wouldn't be Jin if he hadn't accepted the way Kame chose to act after he remembered everything.
In general, this fic was really good. There were indeed times where I kind of forced myself to read certain chapters, but looking back now, I regret nothing, because I always got into the new chapter after a few paragraphs and it was really mind-blowing. You did a perfect job and I'm really glad I decided to follow this fic <3 Thanks for writing and sharing :D
I've had that last line in mind since the moment we decided on the title *____* I felt like, this whole story should be centered around something like this as we both wanted to present a sick story, one where cruel and maddening things happen and where nothing can save you - you're too crazy to be saved after all.
I had a feeling that scene would be the most shocking one and probably not just from this chapter, but from the whole story. Honestly, I wanted to kill Pi in the end but Kazuya was the one that convinced me not to - I realized, just like Jin, that he couldn't do such thing because he didn't want to hurt Kazuya more than he had already done. The scene was fascinating to write though and I personally loved the idea from the end, when Jin wrote MINE on him - scene taken from the video 'We found love' by the way ^^ You're right though, Kazuya didn't deserve anything of what had happened to him - but then again, neither did Jin. The circumstances forced them to become this way and they hadn't been able to stop it.
In the end, I feel like both of them were just victims and Jin's acceptation from the end to be killed by Kazuya shows that - it shows that he had really loved Kazuya but in his own sick way. Just a little bit of happiness had been enough to show him how wrong he had been, but it had already been too late *sigh*
To be honest, I love stories like this one that describe the human nature and as gruesome as it might be at some point, I still love reading and writing because these things actually happen in real life - and it's frightening how easily one can make a mistake that will cost him everything. I know there are some readers that have given up at this story because they hadn't been able to keep up with the cruel scenes that Addictive Obsession shows, so we're really grateful for those who had stayed and had tried to further understand our characters.
So thank you so much for following the story till the end! And wait for the following ones that we'll be posting at our community, 'Cruel Fairytale' has a bit of AO in it - but only at their sex scenes though *laughs*
I totally agree, this whole sentence is enough to sum up their relationship (for those who read the fic, at least xD) <3
Yes, Jin couldn't kill Pi, that would change everything he had been doing until now, imo. I actually adore it when I read scenes where one is marking the other, so I didn't feel the need to comment on what Jin did to Kame <3 But what he did to Pi was indeed surprising, you used that element really greatly.
I agree. Fics that show all sides of human nature are usually better and more realistic and I say it again, you did great. I wish my fics were as good as this xD It's not that I wasn't able to survive some scenes, because I'm actually craving for them xD It's just that lately, for reasons I don't know, I'm not reading as many Akame fics as I used to, so even when I saw this updated, I wasn't that motivated to read it, but like I said, I don't regret forcing myself,because it was always worth it :)
Actually, I had been reading some of your fics at some point and I really liked the idea of... 'Not the same' I think it was called. Your ideas on human nature are pretty good, but you don't describe them enough :P You don't show their pain, their emotions, we can't know the characters as if we, the readers, were them, but exactly like we're reading about them. The scene with Pi in this chapter is pretty long and we took care to show each detail in even more details so that you could sense Jin's madness, Kazuya's desperation and Pi's trust. When you write such scenes, it's something like - bam! he's dead. So just write more and it will be fine :P Sorry for babbling though xDD
Yup, there's a new community where he'll be posting our new stories. It's still not finished, but in a week or so we're going to be posting the new story there ^^ The link for Addictive Time is before the beginning of the chapter :P
Yes, I do remember seeing your comments on that fic :) No worries, I have no problem listening to what people think. In fact, I like it when it's voiced like that instead of bossy comments^^ And you have grasped exactly my problem, so it's even better to hear your opinion :) Tbh, I don't even udnerstand how I always end up making the scenes so short and it's a pity,because I really anticipated writing some of them xD
I'm not sure how this comment will turn out, but I'll do my best. First, I was extremely shocked with what Jin did to Yamapi. I admit, I expected to see many things in this fic, but definitely not this one. I wasn't sure how I should react to that, I can't say I liked it, but at least it was Jin-like. I felt really sorry for Kazuya, though. I still feel like he didn't deserve any of what happened to him, but that's just me xD
Their relationship was sick and twisted and went beyond limits, but damn, I'd be lying if I said I wasn't ok with that xD Because I love situations where things go that far and a severe solution is needed. I didn't expect Kame to forget all those things they did, but at least I knew about his state because I had recently seen it in some TV series in my country xD The exact same symptoms, so it helped :) I knew the fic wouldn't end unless he remembered them, though and I feel like I was waiting all this time for those last scenes, the last meeting between Kame and Jin. I think it was pretty obvious from the beginning that they were so addicted to each other that one would have to go in the end. Though let me just admit that killing both is even better ;) It's always better in those kind of fics and you did a great job at portraying it. Jin's reaction was exactly what I wanted, it just wouldn't be Jin if he hadn't accepted the way Kame chose to act after he remembered everything.
In general, this fic was really good. There were indeed times where I kind of forced myself to read certain chapters, but looking back now, I regret nothing, because I always got into the new chapter after a few paragraphs and it was really mind-blowing. You did a perfect job and I'm really glad I decided to follow this fic <3 Thanks for writing and sharing :D
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I had a feeling that scene would be the most shocking one and probably not just from this chapter, but from the whole story. Honestly, I wanted to kill Pi in the end but Kazuya was the one that convinced me not to - I realized, just like Jin, that he couldn't do such thing because he didn't want to hurt Kazuya more than he had already done. The scene was fascinating to write though and I personally loved the idea from the end, when Jin wrote MINE on him - scene taken from the video 'We found love' by the way ^^ You're right though, Kazuya didn't deserve anything of what had happened to him - but then again, neither did Jin. The circumstances forced them to become this way and they hadn't been able to stop it.
In the end, I feel like both of them were just victims and Jin's acceptation from the end to be killed by Kazuya shows that - it shows that he had really loved Kazuya but in his own sick way. Just a little bit of happiness had been enough to show him how wrong he had been, but it had already been too late *sigh*
To be honest, I love stories like this one that describe the human nature and as gruesome as it might be at some point, I still love reading and writing because these things actually happen in real life - and it's frightening how easily one can make a mistake that will cost him everything. I know there are some readers that have given up at this story because they hadn't been able to keep up with the cruel scenes that Addictive Obsession shows, so we're really grateful for those who had stayed and had tried to further understand our characters.
So thank you so much for following the story till the end! And wait for the following ones that we'll be posting at our community, 'Cruel Fairytale' has a bit of AO in it - but only at their sex scenes though *laughs*
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Yes, Jin couldn't kill Pi, that would change everything he had been doing until now, imo. I actually adore it when I read scenes where one is marking the other, so I didn't feel the need to comment on what Jin did to Kame <3 But what he did to Pi was indeed surprising, you used that element really greatly.
I agree. Fics that show all sides of human nature are usually better and more realistic and I say it again, you did great. I wish my fics were as good as this xD It's not that I wasn't able to survive some scenes, because I'm actually craving for them xD It's just that lately, for reasons I don't know, I'm not reading as many Akame fics as I used to, so even when I saw this updated, I wasn't that motivated to read it, but like I said, I don't regret forcing myself,because it was always worth it :)
You have a community? :D
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Yup, there's a new community where he'll be posting our new stories. It's still not finished, but in a week or so we're going to be posting the new story there ^^ The link for Addictive Time is before the beginning of the chapter :P
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Oh, good :D I'm definitely joining then :D
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