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mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman"">One thing that I often hear around the Internets about Twilight is that while it sucks, it is not without the potential to be good and I agree. If Bella was shown to be selfless, empathetic to the plights of all around her, and strong in spirit despite her physical weakness verse being the selfish, weak- ( Read more... ) -
I'm sorry I'm so lazy
So forever ago I posted chapters of Twilight with my snarky commentary, and while I am proud of them over all, I saw a lot of errors, somethings I wanted to cut, somethings I wanted to add, so I'm setting a reset button, starting over and I promise I will actually finish this time.
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Chapter 18, part 2
The car slowed again, more noticeably, and then suddenly we screeched to a stop on the shoulder of the highway. I flew against the harness, and then slammed back into the seat.
"There are no options," Edward hissed.
"I'm not leaving Charlie!" I yelled.
He ignored me completely. Edward is such a bastard; I love how he only makes an ( Read more... ) -
Chapter 18, part 1
18. THE HUNT
They emerged one by one from the forest edge, ranging a dozen meters apart. Or 40 feet for those of us who live in the states. The first male into the clearing fell back immediately, allowing the other male to take the front, orienting himself around the tall, dark-haired man in a manner that clearly displayed who led the pack. ( Read more... ) -
Running Commenatry on Twilight, Chapter 17 part 3
The score constantly changed as the game continued, and they razzed each other like any street
ballplayers as they took turns with the lead. Occasionally Esme would call them to order. The thunder rumbled on, but we stayed dry, as Alice had predicted.
Carlisle was up to bat, Edward catching, when Alice suddenly gasped. ::cupsear:: Is that ( Read more... ) -
Running Commenatry on Twilight, Chapter 17 part 2
He fought back a smile. Then he bent his head down and touched his cold lips softly to the hollow at the base of my throat.
"Are you still worried now?" he murmured against my skin.
"Yes." I struggled to concentrate. "About hitting trees and getting sick." I feel sick, where’s a gin and tonic?
His nose drew a line up the skin of my ( Read more... ) -
Running Commenatry on Twilight, Chapter 17 part 1
I bridled a little at the word child. "Jacob is not that much younger than I am," I reminded him.
He looked at me then, his anger abruptly fading. "Oh, I know," he assured me with a grin. ::headdesk:: Isn’t great everyone that Edward respects Bella as much as a five-year-old girl?
I sighed and put my hand on the door handle.
"Get ( Read more... )
