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Small Talk with Hiyuu and Kyo
This is a quick, off-tangent try at getting Hiyuu right.
Pretty good? Pretty shitty?
Accurate to character? (Biggest concern!)
Either way go check out the song near the end because it will make you so happy you'll poop rainbows!
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ED 2- Part 2
This is the new Ch2 and it is entirely different from the old one (mostly because it's faster!)
Three major concerns, in order, are-
1. Getting Tatsuma right!
2. No spelling or Grammar mistakes.
3. Making Kyouichi as michevious as possible while still being likable.
Let me know how I did and I will edit accordingly!
General Question for Ch. 3- ( Read more... ) -
ED 2- A Little Drinking, A Little Kissing [Part 1]
Check out Chapter One, version 2.0!
The kiss at the end is MUCH better (rawr!) and there's a discovery made about my favorite mysterious martial artist.
Ideas for Ch2 will be prized and used; I promise!
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Before I cast off toward wherever I'm floating...
I have 2 Questions regarding the greatest anime ever
(excepting Samurai Champloo and Code Geiss)
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Second Edition- Why?
Because I've got some free time, and all the grammar issues were getting to me.
Also to correct my Tatsuma/Hiyuu idiocy *stubborn, stubborn*.
But really, because I want to write something I actually like. Also, to get the story moving in a longer direction since the anime isn't, haha *tear*.
Anyway, to my adored readers- Always feel free to peruse and ( Read more... ) -
old ch 2
Kyouichi shifted his hand ( Read more... ) -
A Deal and A Duel (Part 3)
It was Sunday when they’d come to their agreement, and to Kyouichi’s dismay nothing had happened for four days. Sure, they’d made out and fooled around (especially between classes in the locker room closet) but hadn’t made good on their deal.
There had been chances. Hiyuu stayed at Kyouichi’s house every night except Wednesday, yet still ( Read more... ) -
If It's Not Fair- It's Fate (part 4)
“No, no, no, NO!”
Hiyuu smiled and rolled out from under the frustrated, taller boy.
“It’s not fair!” Kyouichi raised himself from the ground and planted on the edge of the bed with all the force of a tempered teen.
“How could it be more fair? I let you pick the competition and even after you cheated TWO TIMES you still lost.” Hiyuu sat next to ( Read more... )
