Second Edition- Why?

[a_non_ah_mouse]

Because I've got some free time, and all the grammar issues were getting to me.
Also to correct my Tatsuma/Hiyuu idiocy *stubborn, stubborn*.

But really, because I want to write something I actually like. Also, to get the story moving in a longer direction since the anime isn't, haha *tear*.

Anyway, to my adored readers- Always feel free to peruse and

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Sure, I'll try... *looks around room for a Japanese speaker*

[a_non_ah_mouse]

Also none in the hallway.
Uh, I sort of took down the "poopy" version.
I could put it back up, true, but then anyone new would see the irregularities come ch.2. Plus there's a whole new "Kyouichi figured something weird out about Tatsuma b/c X happened" which needs some conversation in ch.2.
And then who knows where it goes.
For example:
Pick a cool/romantic/bad-ass/whatever setting.
I'll work it in. ;)

Re: Sure, I'll try... *looks around room for a Japanese speaker*

[a_non_ah_mouse]

Precisely!
Partly because I needed to edit them for poor grammar, spelling and partly because I ran out of direction. I can't just keep them fighting and then making up constantly.
I'm fishing around for cool conversations, settings, or things for them to do. If you have any ideas just drop them here and I'll fit it in.
Please do read the new ch.1 and feel free to make any suggestions for where ch2 should go.
Team work!

[anonymous]

*Jaw drops*

[a_non_ah_mouse]

*opens Queen's "We Will Rock You" on youtube*
*jumps out of seat, starts dancing*

This is the YOU-FREAKING_ROCK Dance and I'm doing it for the next thirty minutes because YOU FREAKING ROCK!

And I totally have the time to watch this... wait when does class start?

*feels brain not caring*

Back to the point-
Name anything!
It shall be written.