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a_non_ah_mouse

Small Talk with Hiyuu and Kyo

Mar 11, 2009 02:34

This is a quick, off-tangent try at getting Hiyuu right.
Pretty good? Pretty shitty?
Accurate to character? (Biggest concern!)

Either way go check out the song near the end because it will make you so happy you'll poop rainbows!

( 'A Whimsical Afternoon' )

kyouichi is so awesome

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xmystearicax March 12 2009, 10:52:58 UTC

LOL AWESOME, I WISH THOSE WERE CLASSES TOO. D:

Good job by the way-- I didn't find that was OoC at all~

Crowing YALP of accomplishment a_non_ah_mouse March 12 2009, 11:22:36 UTC

YES!
*does booty popping dance*
Did it right--got it tight--out of sight--up all night--won the fight--I so bright--

High five!

Ok, thank you SO much for responding fast!
Really, this gives me so much insight and more to work with. *huge grin and bright eyes*
I now feel certain there are 5 agreeably "Tatsuma"-like responses when drama happens that are not too aggressive. They were utilized in the clippet above and are as follows-
1. Silence
2. Playing with some object nearby
3. Staring at the person who spoke and blinking
4. Hiding in hoody
5. Flying off

Do you think there are any others?

Re: Crowing YALP of accomplishment xmystearicax March 12 2009, 19:42:58 UTC

Yep, that sounds about right. XD Uh, the only other I can think of is like... drinking strawberry milk or something.

Re: Crowing YALP of accomplishment a_non_ah_mouse March 15 2009, 08:55:12 UTC

Not a bad idea... something like-

"Tatsuma was unnerved by this comment. He kept his eyes low and took a long sip from the small pink straw. The milk was as sweet as the silence."

Yeah? Just using the milk as a tool for not speaking. It seems that not speaking is a lot of how Tatsuma defends his secrets and his person. I'm finally starting to grasp this...

*looks back at chapter 2*
You are no good!!!
*kicks it*

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He flies like this!!! *jumps* a_non_ah_mouse March 12 2009, 18:49:34 UTC

But higher, longer, and doesn't come down.
There is ample evidence in TMGK and I'll stand by that until the week after I die!
Oh, but thank you for the kudos on getting Tatsuma right.
Are there any other ways he expresses frustration, or do you think the one I use are it?

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Re: He flies like this!!! *jumps* a_non_ah_mouse March 15 2009, 08:46:46 UTC

Is that picture meant to signify a yawn, a yell, or a roar ( ... )

natsumi_chian March 12 2009, 14:39:17 UTC

i laughed when i read this! XD

a_non_ah_mouse March 12 2009, 18:28:55 UTC

That's a cute little user pic! Did you make it yourself? Kyo kind of looks like a sock puppet with buttons for eyes!
I'm glad it made you laugh- that was the goal!

natsumi_chian March 14 2009, 11:16:56 UTC

LOL i drew it XD
you know those 'nyoro-n~' 4KOMA a lot of pplz draw?? XD

a_non_ah_mouse March 15 2009, 08:51:42 UTC

"nyoro-n" ?

"4koma" ?

WHAT?! Now you know that isn't any english I've ever heard of, or spanish for that matter either!

But you actually drew it and then scanned it in, or was it a computer picture? Either way- very cool!
If you just so happened to make one of hiyuu and leave it on your page where certainly people (that have never drawn a decent stick figure) could steal it then I would be forever grateful!
If not it's still an excellent picture! You rawk.