If It's Not Fair- It's Fate (part 4)

[a_non_ah_mouse]

“No, no, no, NO!”

Hiyuu smiled and rolled out from under the frustrated, taller boy.

“It’s not fair!” Kyouichi raised himself from the ground and planted on the edge of the bed with all the force of a tempered teen.

“How could it be more fair? I let you pick the competition and even after you cheated TWO TIMES you still lost.” Hiyuu sat next to

Comments

[xmystearicax]

LOL
I actually thought Hiyuu would win. XD

hehe, me too at first!

[a_non_ah_mouse]

I fought for weeks (14 of them!) trying to come up with some way to pull this off. In the end I just couldn't see it being fair to the "first timer" to have to take his turn first, you know? Plus you just can't do that do the taller guy, regardless how much the shorter guy could kick his ass. It's a gay law.

[freakresponse]

I'm glad Kyouichi won that one. XD Great fic.

thanks!

[a_non_ah_mouse]

Always good to find a new fan of this weird off beat anime with awesome characters! Have you flipped through the other chapters? I've got a freaking epic going here. Feel free to comment on the old about stuff you liked or disliked, especially if you think my character descriptions is off. I'm trying to stick with their real personalities. Oh! And check out the last one which had a twist ending that even shocked me!