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Out of Choices - Chapter 44

Aug 10, 2009 21:19

Title: Out Of Choices
Chapter 44: Endings (Previous Chapters: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19.1, 19.2, 20, 21, 22.1, 22.2, 23, 24, 25, 26, 27, 28, 29, 30, 31, 32, 33.1, 33.2, 34, 35, 36, 37, 38, 39, 40, 41, 42, 43)
Author:JCAddict/picklewinkle/Sher
Fandom: Twilight
Word Count:4,849
Rating: R/M, for sex and language ( Read more... )

ooc, twilight, fanfiction

Comments 6

mad4hugh August 11 2009, 03:44:17 UTC

YAY! You made me very happy! You should be really proud...these three chapters must have been difficult to write. As usual though, you did a really beautiful job!

Kudos!

jkrumrn August 12 2009, 01:36:07 UTC

That was terrific. Thank you for so many updates recently. Thank you for 3 beautiful chapters and I can't wait to see what is in store for these two.

cowgirlgraphics August 12 2009, 21:44:20 UTC

Shar - Did you get my review on FF? I heard everything was going into cyberspace even though it said it was successfully posted. This last chapter - GAH - no offence to the orginal (ahem, SMeyer) this blows that out of the water.

Barb

seebeeyasays August 13 2009, 01:42:18 UTC

<333 is all I can say haha can't wait to see what's in store for those two :D

susieqtaj143 August 18 2009, 19:40:36 UTC

hey sweetheart, this is as usual, fantastic!i new he would transform her, and things would be ok.i didn't get to read the last chapter right away,i've had some super fun family drama!my husband moved out, so it took awhile to get back in the swing of things!i love your work sher!it's all win as far as i'm concerned.much love to you as always!!!can't wait for the next chapter!!

optimistic4ever January 29 2010, 03:53:30 UTC

In a word.....FANTASTIC! Sher, this was wonderful. The fear that Edward had of possibly not being able to stop drinking her blood, the determination that he showed just by staying by her side throughout the entire transformation, the amount of love that he showed her from the very start, all of these proved that they have a love that trancends everything normal. They are soulmates. The best part of this chapter in my eyes though was the end when Bella smirked at him, and the smiled from ear to ear. That was his forgiveness! Nice job Sher! *love you madly woman!*