Sealed with a Kiss [11]

Sep 02, 2012 00:54


Sealed with a Kiss
Overall Rating; PG-13 
Rating for this chapter; R
Pairings; MyungYeol, WooGyu, slight!WooYeol
Genre; AU, romance, comedy
Summery; Sungyeol wants his ex jealous. Myungsoo needs the money. It’s a win-win deal.
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letsflywannabe September 1 2012, 22:32:30 UTC
waaaah ~ i really liked it :'D
their relationship is progressing steadily (Y)
also i liked the fact that there was no woohyun to distract them hihihi :P i think the best moment was when sungyeol starts comparing woohyun and myungsoo and realises he likes myungsoo a lot more than he ever liked woohyun ^.^ yaaaaaaattaaaaa ~!
thank you for regularly updating ~
<3

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yeolmonster September 2 2012, 16:23:07 UTC
Wah! I'm really glad you like my story so far!

Thank you so much for commenting and reading the story!
(Woohyun plays a smaller part now that Myungsoo is in his heart <3)

Thank you for sticking with me although there's a lot of time between one update and another! ;~;

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exoticelf September 1 2012, 23:10:17 UTC
SPOT.

banging my head in the car rite now omg

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exoticelf September 2 2012, 12:19:04 UTC
Okay, this chapter was perfect. The practice was perfect. Myungsoo was perfect. Sungyeol was perfect. Even Hoya and Sungjong were perfect omg.

You broke my heart when you described sungyeol compared the kiss with myungsoo to woohyun's. It was so freaking perfect omg.
And the practice, i really like that you didn't make them have sex or do more than kissing. Cuz that would been really fast, with sungyeol being the kind of awkardness and all LOL.

expect a long ass message from me when i get home! <3

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yeolmonster September 2 2012, 16:35:21 UTC
;~; Then it's good?
Urgh, I got so nervous I hesitated to update. I just sat and stared at the post button like forever.
And then nobody commented like for what seemed forever, and went to sleep crying that nobody liked it.
XD Then I woke in the morning, and I have good replies, thank god!

How could they possibly have sex now? :\ Waaayyy too early! I mean, even though guys don't mind those stuff, but I don't think they'd just have sex with their friends because they feel like it.... right? /ponders/ Or maybe they do.

Well, are you expecting a really descriptive smut now? ;~;
(and forgive me if I'm being nosy, but where are you? :D Are you on vacation?)

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exoticelf September 2 2012, 23:36:24 UTC
yes it was perfect!!!!

sorry for the late comment :( my dad decided (randomly) that he wanted to visit his friends that are in New York and it was like a freaking 7 hours drive ughhh no internet for 7 hours i died omg

no omg dont go crying to sleep omg ;A; your updates are perfect <3

you knew where to stop! yes, the sex is waaaaayyyy too early, but the make out session wasn't too heavy eithr! it was perfect for their first time! ummmm idk about real life, but from my experience from reading suju fics, they can sex anywhere from 5 mins they meet lol

For the smut, can i ask if you are going to write another practice session before you write the smut? or like are they going to do a little more than kissing anytime soon??

(wish i was on vacation but no i was driving back and forth from New york for more than 14 hours ;~;)

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penny_lane_42 September 1 2012, 23:20:38 UTC
That made me really, really happy. Really happy. Their dynamic is just really fantastic because they're good friends by this point and just flat-out enjoy each others' company, they but they're also still snarky, and there's also the attraction hanging over everything. I love it.

Details! I love that Sungyeol is totally unfazed by Myungsoo's neighborhood and home--that he, in fact, likes it and is fascinated by it. I'm really glad your Sungyeol isn't a snob. Because I get the feeling Myungsoo would be kind of nervous about taking anyone home, but Sungyeol's enthusiasm must have soothed his nerves. That was really sweet.

Myungsoo just touching his arms and it being almost too much to handle: perfect. Sungyeol's clearly about to come out of his skin. I especially liked the part about Myungsoo's touch seeming almost alien in comparison to Woohyun's.

They’re both blushing and a bit excited, and they’re talking nonsense, and Sungyeol feels his whole body hum with an unfamiliar zoom. Favorite ( ... )

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yeolmonster September 2 2012, 16:48:35 UTC
xD
Every time I read your comment, I feel really really happy. You make me tear up! I'm really glad you like it so much, even though it's awkward and sappy. :)

Heh, on the first draft of my story, Woohyun and Sungyeol had both visited Myungsoo's neighborhood together, and Woohyun was like freaking out they're going to get raped and robbed and killed. But after that, when I rewrote the story, I had actually thought about how nervous Myungsoo would feel about the whole thing.
And it occurred to me, that because everything about Myungsoo interests Sungyeol, where he lives, shouldn't be an exclusion.

You are completley right! I had rewrote the kiss part for about 10 - maybe more, not sure by now - times. So stuff shifted to a smaller time in order to keep it interesting.
I'm sorry! I changed it to five minutes. ;~;

Kim Myungsoo should learn of self-restraint. Sometimes he does such things, he makes my heart pop out of his chest... ;~;

Thank you again for commenting! :D

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dapdaphaex September 2 2012, 02:38:56 UTC
gdi i was already having myungyeol feels and u just HAD to post that photo to exploit it. LOL thanks for the update! Theyre so absolutely adorable

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yeolmonster September 2 2012, 16:49:27 UTC
:D MYUNGYEOL TAKES OVER EVERYTHING!

You're the one who adorable! *hugs*
Thank you once again for the comment!!!

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asiialoove September 2 2012, 02:54:23 UTC
Hiiii~~ New reader here :) I just read it all in one go and when I didn't see the "NEXT CHAPTER" thingy at the end i screamed. Out. Loud. Literally OMG o.o I'm like so frustrated right now, you just killed me hahaha ( ... )

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yeolmonster September 2 2012, 16:58:22 UTC
Hello, new reader!
I'm glad you found my humble story, and really really happy that you liked it so far!!!

I ship everything in Infinite! ;~; WooGyu and MyungYeol are my favorite parings and I have no preferences on either of them, but if you add Yadong, or Hojong, or 2woo, or Donggyu, or MyungYeol or anything else, I'm just as happy~

Princess Myungkitty! You got me rolling on the floor. *adds it in for future insults*

Don't worry about the others! :D Stuff will bound to happen to everyone! Jongie and Dongwoo and Hoya play an important part in the next chapters!

Thank you for your beautiful comment! I hope you'll keep sticking with the fic!
STAY TUNED!

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