Sealed with a Kiss [11]

[yeolmonster]

Sealed with a Kiss
Overall Rating; PG-13 
Rating for this chapter; R
Pairings; MyungYeol, WooGyu, slight!WooYeol
Genre; AU, romance, comedy
Summery; Sungyeol wants his ex jealous. Myungsoo needs the money. It’s a win-win deal.
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[penny_lane_42]

That made me really, really happy. Really happy. Their dynamic is just really fantastic because they're good friends by this point and just flat-out enjoy each others' company, they but they're also still snarky, and there's also the attraction hanging over everything. I love it.

Details! I love that Sungyeol is totally unfazed by Myungsoo's neighborhood and home--that he, in fact, likes it and is fascinated by it. I'm really glad your Sungyeol isn't a snob. Because I get the feeling Myungsoo would be kind of nervous about taking anyone home, but Sungyeol's enthusiasm must have soothed his nerves. That was really sweet.

Myungsoo just touching his arms and it being almost too much to handle: perfect. Sungyeol's clearly about to come out of his skin. I especially liked the part about Myungsoo's touch seeming almost alien in comparison to Woohyun's.

They’re both blushing and a bit excited, and they’re talking nonsense, and Sungyeol feels his whole body hum with an unfamiliar zoom.

Favorite.

And the ending with admitting he has a crush! OH YAY!

The only thing that confused me was this part:

He doesn’t want to exaggerate and say that was the best fifteen minutes in his life, but he’s pretty sure it’s damn close to it.

Because it didn't seem with the way you wrote the lines before this that fifteen minutes had passed. So I kinda went, "Huh?"

But everything else was lovely.

Didn't that fancam just kill you? I have no idea how to live in a world where Myungsoo does those things. KIM MYUNGSOO YOU'RE KILLING ME.

[yeolmonster]

xD
Every time I read your comment, I feel really really happy. You make me tear up! I'm really glad you like it so much, even though it's awkward and sappy. :)

Heh, on the first draft of my story, Woohyun and Sungyeol had both visited Myungsoo's neighborhood together, and Woohyun was like freaking out they're going to get raped and robbed and killed. But after that, when I rewrote the story, I had actually thought about how nervous Myungsoo would feel about the whole thing.
And it occurred to me, that because everything about Myungsoo interests Sungyeol, where he lives, shouldn't be an exclusion.

You are completley right! I had rewrote the kiss part for about 10 - maybe more, not sure by now - times. So stuff shifted to a smaller time in order to keep it interesting.
I'm sorry! I changed it to five minutes. ;~;

Kim Myungsoo should learn of self-restraint. Sometimes he does such things, he makes my heart pop out of his chest... ;~;

Thank you again for commenting! :D