Things that Go Bump in the Night [5/5]

[x_saru_x]

Title: Things that Go Bump in the Night [5/5]
Author: moi
Pairing: JongKey
Genre: AU
Rating: NC-17 for this chapter
Disclaimer: SME owns pretty boys and I own words. Talk about unfairness.
Summary: He breaks in what he swears isn't cold sweat, seconds before the door actually swings open.

Comments

[mei_zi]

"Off, take them off," he commands/requests/begs,
Was I supposed to find this funny? 'Cause I LOL-ed. XD
nails digging into flesh; tearing apart healing scars.
OHHH, I remember that. 8DD
I'm still trying to recover from all the sexy in this chapter. You did an amazing job. <3
I really liked this story! :D
Looking forward to the next fic from you! (:

[x_saru_x]

OHHH, I remember that. 8DD
How could you forget XDD But seriously, the jongkey fandom needs more rough love :Q____

Really happy you liked this one, and I hope my next stuff will live up to your guys' expectations D:
Thanks for reading ♥

[siaht]

Like I said before, I didn't want it to end. But it ended so well, omg what could I even say. I hope you know just how good it is, because I may be not fully able to tell you in case you don't, 'cause I'm trying my best to even be coherent.

I just want to quote one part, though:

"How-"

"Your brother."

Right.

I saw Taemin's smirking face in my head the moment I read those lines. xDD

omg when will you write more? And your layout is friggin' adorable omg /steals

[x_saru_x]

Hearing the ending was decent is a huge relief. I've been angsting just a tiny bit over it D:
Taemin was evil, but gj at getting those two together, yes? XD

Writing is all I've been thinking about, lately. I've got some ideas, but I also have to take care of the SBB 2010 fic and. /hyperventilates I'll manage XD

And omg, honey_x_flavor made it. She's awesome personified *_* Steal away ♥

[fatalblissy]

This was amazing. ;A; This should be on a SHINee fanfiction list of honours and awesome or something. I really want to make a smart comment, since I review a lot of books and such, but I can't really right now.

[fatalblissy]

Okay, okay, trying to be coherent

[x_saru_x]

I don't even know what to say, never thought I'd ever get a review like this on this fic. /blown away

This little voice in my head keeps saying I could have done much better, had I just taken my time with it. Especially with points such as the characterisation and the progression of everything.
Reading this just made me feel much better about it, like, seriously.

Thank you so so much for all your words, honestly. Wish I could give you a proper reply ♥

[fatalblissy]

Everything and Anything could be done better and not just this fic; movies books scientific reports yada yada, but this was amazing already, so don't feel insecure about it. :)

Just glad I made you happy. <3

[narisa_rei]

ahh~~ lovely~~
and HOT!! *grins*
love this story..
and btw, i like ur banner too..
they look so sweet there~ =D

[x_saru_x]

I'm in love with my banner too ♥

So glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reading :]