Things that Go Bump in the Night [5/5]

Feb 18, 2010 17:45

Title: Things that Go Bump in the Night [5/5]
Author: moi
Pairing: JongKey
Genre: AU
Rating: NC-17 for this chapter
Disclaimer: SME owns pretty boys and I own words. Talk about unfairness.
Summary: He breaks in what he swears isn't cold sweat, seconds before the door actually swings open.
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!fic, ♥jongkey

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kisa829 February 18 2010, 17:49:55 UTC
...I'm a little short of breath from this last chapter...*breathes deeply*

I'm going to quote my fav parts or I'll just end up copying and pasting the chapter. The sex scene was so good, so hot, and just well written. The interaction in the aftermath with the keys and whatnot were funny and brilliant, I totally laughed at Jonghyun's lines.

I'm not even sure what else to comment on because I loved ALL of it so damn much.

I'm looking forward to your next fic~ ♥

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x_saru_x February 18 2010, 18:26:18 UTC
I felt a little bit rusty with the sex scene, considering I hadn't written anything rated for quite some time, but I'm so happy you enjoyed it. *feels better*

Thank you so much for reading! I'll write more, soon :3

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xxqod February 18 2010, 19:49:01 UTC
OH MY GAWD!!! XD
I knew it was coming, but this smexiness!!! XD
You just made me die happily XD

Their bitching is so much love and Jonghyun is unexpectedly cheesy !!
That wake-up call! <3

The "Your brother" is very random XD ROFL.

I loved the humor mixed with all the smex! :D
At least I thought it was humor XD

Thank you for writing this awesomeness! :D
<3 ~~

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x_saru_x February 18 2010, 21:22:30 UTC
Well, dying happily is a nice thing ♥ XD

I'm glad you liked it!
Thank you for reading and commenting :3

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nuile February 18 2010, 20:48:26 UTC
TOTAL WIN. ABSOLUTE HOTNESS.
*_______*

I loved this story to no end. And I'm gonna reread it many times...
BBF and stuff... I LOVE you, for writing it *_*

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x_saru_x February 18 2010, 21:24:03 UTC
That's seriously awesome to hear! \o/

All the love back at you ♥
Thanks for reading!

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wykedpanda February 18 2010, 21:59:37 UTC
*screams hysterically*

:DDDDDDD << my expression

really?!?! this is soo...gahwaodia :DDDDDD hehehe

jonghyun's pick-up line for getting key in his house is very suave.. using his spare apartment key and whatnot. very nice~ :DDD kekekeke and oh, taemin...setting up his brother like that :D

Thank you for sharing!

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x_saru_x February 19 2010, 16:12:39 UTC
LOL Jonghyun's plans are flawless B]

But I'm so happy you liked it!
Thank you for reading ♥

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dori_echizen February 19 2010, 04:52:44 UTC
aksjkajsajsk fucks!
this really was too sexy!
I love this story
I get nostalgic T_T lol
Thanks for this ♥

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x_saru_x February 19 2010, 16:15:14 UTC
Awwww, don't be all nostalgic, or I'll start feeling like that, too lol ♥

Seeing you enjoyed this makes me happy :3
Thank you for reading!

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