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Dancehopefairy's Season 4

Aug 23, 2009 13:35

Hello, this is Rochvelleth :) I just wanted to help dancehopefairy out by re-posting her season 4 without the underlining, so it's easier for you to read.

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dancehopefairy, season 4 competition

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shaman_whore August 24 2009, 22:40:55 UTC

Was gonna comment in the original entry but I see it's probably to be deleted, so here I am!
For a start, welcome to the community! Always nice to have new people :) And wow, if English isn't your first language may I say you speak(/write) it very well! Where are you from, out of interest? Whoops I forgot the disclaimer on mine :P never mind.
I like the idea of Prince John bringing in new people to repopulate Nottingham. Archer is momentarily taken aback when he hears the amount haha, I can totally picture that ( ... )

dancehopefairy August 25 2009, 19:40:44 UTC

Hi, thanks for your reply!
It's funny because my longchamp is from a robin hood computer game i noticed the similarity in names but it never really hit me. I only realised after i wrote all of it that i could have made it more interesting by making him 'the' longchamp. Maybe if he survives he can be the long lost cousin or something.

'Nice to see Kate apologising to Much'
That episode when she asked Much to talk to Robin, that was really mean. I was really mad at her and Robin after that episode.

Yeah Loki is the goat, I should have made that more clear sorry. It was my little tribute to the orginal Clorinda being a shepherdess (and the disney character i imagine her to look a little like also has a goat friend). Of course a sheep is not a goat, but yeah..

anyway thanks again for your nice comments

shaman_whore August 26 2009, 01:13:30 UTC

That episode when she asked Much to talk to Robin, that was really mean. I was really mad at her and Robin after that episode. Gah, I know, what the hell was that? Stupid bloody women (don't worry, I'm a woman too, I'm allowed to say that :P ) Much deserves so much better than that silly tart.
Loki the goat is hella cool (forgive me the use of 'hella' won't you, I've been watching South Park and it infects my brain).
Anyway, I did a nice big comment on the rest of it below, I apologise if any/all of it sounds like utter nonsense, I tend to get excited when I read things and have to comment on everything! But it tends to show how good I think people's work is :)

shaman_whore August 26 2009, 01:07:59 UTC

mrow, why would the other blame Will and Djaq? silly people. Ooh, a mystery archer eh? Interesting! With a poisoned arrow as well! Sneaky. *le gasp* Nicholae! You fiend! Wh- the camp? Nooooooooooo!! Will worked so hard!
Naww, yay for clever Loki going to find Archer. whoops, went through that whole ep without commenting, almost! was very good though, and the ending was sweet.
A cave, bet Much isn't happy! As if that day wouldn't be hard enough for him as it is. Sounds like Will's done a good job of it though! Much is staring into the distance. Sad!Much? *cuddles* Ooh, good idea on that guy's history with Guillame. Aww, Allan. And Roy... nice ending ( ... )

dancehopefairy August 27 2009, 21:54:48 UTC

I don't think the others necessarily blame Will and Djaq (though deep inside they might secretly think they should have been there), but I imagine Will and Djaq, especially Will, might feel a little guilty and weird around the others ( ... )

shaman_whore August 27 2009, 23:00:07 UTC

Oh no that is what I meant, that Will and Djaq would be the silly ones for thinking the others would blame them! I do get that though, that they might feel that way, even if they shouldn't! I think the Nicolae thing was a nice unexpected twist, but you could always put a little lead up to it in if you write the series up properly.
I just realised i haven't mentioned Gisborne in the entire season :( Hehe, whoops! To be fair though, the gang would be missing Robin for all the obvious reasons, but none of them would really miss Guyy that much would they, so it would make sense for him not to be mentioned as much ( ... )

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dancehopefairy August 27 2009, 22:12:48 UTC

:) I could just see them sitting in the trees, waiting for them to look up hehe

Thanks for commenting, appreciate it!

rochvelleth August 27 2009, 12:23:36 UTC

I've finally got round to making some proper comments now :) Firstly, can I just say that your English is excellent ( ... )

dancehopefairy August 27 2009, 22:27:11 UTC

I think the not mentioning Djaq bit in my story was mostly my little way of protesting that no one acknowledged Will and Djaq in series 3 ;) But I like your interpretation, maybe it hurt too much to dwell too much upon the past.

Luke kind of disappeared after the beginning...

Thanks for commenting!

rochvelleth August 29 2009, 15:45:26 UTC

Sorry it took me so long to get to part 2! I'm here now ( ... )