Dancehopefairy's Season 4

[rochvelleth]

Hello, this is Rochvelleth :) I just wanted to help dancehopefairy out by re-posting her season 4 without the underlining, so it's easier for you to read.

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[dancehopefairy]

I don't think the others necessarily blame Will and Djaq (though deep inside they might secretly think they should have been there), but I imagine Will and Djaq, especially Will, might feel a little guilty and weird around the others.
The Nicolae bit, the pact thing sort of came out of nowhere didn't it.Maybe i should have put a scene in where he stole it, and in hindsight i should have made the reasons Clorinda stays a little more clear.

'Much is staring into the distance. Sad!Much?'
Robin's birthday would be such a loaded day for all of them, but especially Much. He probably has many memories of birthdays with robin. I just realised i haven't mentioned Gisborne in the entire season :(

Glad you thought Gwyneth calling the guards after seeing Archer with three woman was funny.That was what i was going for :)

In hindsight (again..) i think i might have made more of the Djaq pregnant thing, might have been a nice storyline for them, instead of resolving it so quickly (it's just hard to imagine them arguing for long, they're so sweet together)and maybe Clorinda and Ivanhoe should have stayed outside to help the gang, since her leaving them and coming back didn't seem to add a lot this way except.
I don't know if you've ever seen/read Ivanhoe (in unrelated news) but I saw the movie a few days ago, and I secretly wished Ivanhoe had married Rebecca instead of Rowena. Maybe I should have written Rebecca in my series since she lived in York mmh..

Okay sorry back on topic, I've been wanting to see'the prince of thieves' for a while now, hoefully one of these days.

Thanks for your nice comments,enjoyed reading them. :)

[shaman_whore]

Oh no that is what I meant, that Will and Djaq would be the silly ones for thinking the others would blame them! I do get that though, that they might feel that way, even if they shouldn't! I think the Nicolae thing was a nice unexpected twist, but you could always put a little lead up to it in if you write the series up properly.
I just realised i haven't mentioned Gisborne in the entire season :( Hehe, whoops! To be fair though, the gang would be missing Robin for all the obvious reasons, but none of them would really miss Guyy that much would they, so it would make sense for him not to be mentioned as much.
With regards to the hindsight thing, I think that's the trouble probably all of us had, once its finished and posted it's quite easy to think 'oh I wish I'd done it this way' or whatever. But it comes down to wordcount really, there simply wasn't room to get every detail in, but it's probably a good thing - if we didn't have a limit we'd have been writing out every little idea and our work would have become more story- than synopsis-like, it wouldn't have been as focused and made us work as hard to get everything concise (plus it would've taken even longer to read!). Put simply, it's a shame we couldn't get everthing we might've wanted to in, but I'm sure everyone understands, and it's probably for the best!
It might've been a good storline for Will and Djaq, but like you said, it is pretty hard to imagine them arguing for very long, so it makes sense for them to make up so quickly.
Haven't seen/read Ivvanhoe I'm afraid!

You're welcome, it was a lovely read! And I'm quite the comment/review whore so I always try to leave other people nice long ones :) xx