Dancehopefairy's Season 4

[rochvelleth]

Hello, this is Rochvelleth :) I just wanted to help dancehopefairy out by re-posting her season 4 without the underlining, so it's easier for you to read.

Comments

[shaman_whore]

Oh no that is what I meant, that Will and Djaq would be the silly ones for thinking the others would blame them! I do get that though, that they might feel that way, even if they shouldn't! I think the Nicolae thing was a nice unexpected twist, but you could always put a little lead up to it in if you write the series up properly.
I just realised i haven't mentioned Gisborne in the entire season :( Hehe, whoops! To be fair though, the gang would be missing Robin for all the obvious reasons, but none of them would really miss Guyy that much would they, so it would make sense for him not to be mentioned as much.
With regards to the hindsight thing, I think that's the trouble probably all of us had, once its finished and posted it's quite easy to think 'oh I wish I'd done it this way' or whatever. But it comes down to wordcount really, there simply wasn't room to get every detail in, but it's probably a good thing - if we didn't have a limit we'd have been writing out every little idea and our work would have become more story- than synopsis-like, it wouldn't have been as focused and made us work as hard to get everything concise (plus it would've taken even longer to read!). Put simply, it's a shame we couldn't get everthing we might've wanted to in, but I'm sure everyone understands, and it's probably for the best!
It might've been a good storline for Will and Djaq, but like you said, it is pretty hard to imagine them arguing for very long, so it makes sense for them to make up so quickly.
Haven't seen/read Ivvanhoe I'm afraid!

You're welcome, it was a lovely read! And I'm quite the comment/review whore so I always try to leave other people nice long ones :) xx