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tmn1966 July 26 2015, 13:23:25 UTC
This part, this one right here, is one of my favorites, because it’s so simple, yet shows how much Jared understands Jensen and how much Jensen just likes being around Jared:

And Jensen did let Jared tell him all about the Padalecki Thanksgiving Feast right down to the last side dish. It felt good just to listen and to not have to really think about anything but what Jared was saying and just offer up a comment or two here and there, let Jared do the talking. Jensen drank his coffee and ended up staying for a second cup.I also really like how you handled Jensen’s guilt when his mom asked after Chad. Of course he still cares about Chad, but Jensen’s hurting and still leery about everyone knowing about the dang letter, so he talked himself right back into thinking that whatever cold shoulder he was giving to Chad, Chad deserved it. Still so very understandable ( ... )

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tmn1966 July 26 2015, 13:23:56 UTC
And Chris, god bless him, knows when to keep his mouth shut, but also knows when to say things that need to be said!! Yay!!!

Here’s another favorite, it’s just, oh my god, too funny and I can so see it playing out in my head:

“Looking for any visible indicators of your insanity.”

“What, like this?” and Jared kind of spun around arms flailing into the start of some crazy gesture when he dropped his ice cream that they had literally just got moments before at Jared’s insistence.

Jensen snickered a little but then sucked in his lips to try and cover and he placed his hand over his mouth to hold it in.

Jared pouted, he’d barely even touched it. And he was staring down at the smooshy melty carnage when Jensen’s fully intact ice cream dropped into his eye line.

“Here,” Jensen said softly, “You can have mine.”

And then the kiss. Oh boy.

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the_rant_girl July 31 2015, 22:02:48 UTC
:D:D You know at that juncture I think Jared most wanted Jensen to know that he was there for him, and well you know he doesn't want to make Jensen feel uncomfortable or like being a virgin somehow makes him weird/pitiable. And well you know as we discussed I think that the letter would also have kind of been confirmation for Jared that Jensen is gay. But yeah Jared's not pushing either issue, and it doesn't quite sit right with him how he came to know those things. So yeah lol And he certainly knows enough to know that Jensen values their friendship/enjoys being in Jared's company. So providing distractions from things Jensen doesn't want to think about/making him feel better ( ... )

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julchen11 April 19 2017, 13:47:34 UTC
#1 - 4 ( ... )

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julchen11 April 19 2017, 17:44:00 UTC
Oh dio mio, the last part. So they are spending much time together and is just has to happen. These green eyes are mesmerising and who could resist? These lips are made for kissing so who would not like to kiss Jensen. These lashes caressing these beautiful freckles, who wouldn't like to be as close as possible.
Oh Jensen, don't be afraid of your own feelings.
Sweetie! Can't we just glue them together, together we could manage this. Let's go to Danni, I am sure she knows what to do
Thank you so much for this great work, my friend. I should call you wordsmith of the heart. I can feel your heart beating in EVERY SINGLE WORD, YOU ARE AMAZING!!! ♥♥♥

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the_rant_girl May 3 2017, 23:16:45 UTC
Ahhhhh, thank you, my lovely!! And yes we can definitely all relate to not wanting alarms to go off, or wanting to leave bed lol I know I can lol ( ... )

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