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speechie42 in tf2007fun

Cybernetics

Jan 22, 2008 23:12

Finals this week. No time to proof. Enjoy.

Title: Cybernetics (chapter 36)
Rating: PG-13ish
Pairing: Barricade/OC
Summary: Uh...they're driving. Yes.
Warnings: Language?
Disclaimer: Do not own.

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poster: speechie42, oc, rated pg-13 (07-08), fanfiction 2008 (winter), barricade (07-08)

Comments 28

vejiraziel January 23 2008, 07:32:36 UTC

Awww, look at them bicker like a married couple! X3 Sho cuuute! Lovely as usual, can't wait to see what happens next!

speechie42 January 23 2008, 15:55:31 UTC

Funny, I can't wait to post what happens next! ^^

kurichai January 23 2008, 10:48:49 UTC

I haven't commented before on this story, but I've been following it avidly since joining the community.

I absolutely love this chapter and the interactions between Natalie and Barricade. It adds further depth to both of them as characters. I've always seen dialogue as the best character building method out there.

Just one thing I saw that jumped out at me. Barricade mentions that there are three things making the situation ambiguous, yet only mentions two. What was the third?

Good luck on finals!

artemischan January 23 2008, 14:03:41 UTC

The third thing is Barricade himself. Natalie was a little scared at this point, and he couldn’t really blame her on account of his being number three in the cause for ambiguity. <--See? ^_^

kurichai January 23 2008, 15:36:34 UTC

Oh jeez, that'll teach me to post before 6am XD

Okay, so just ignore my comment about that and enjoy the praise! :D

speechie42 January 23 2008, 16:01:38 UTC

*enjoys praise*

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cazcatharsis January 23 2008, 12:58:37 UTC

*happy sigh*
just like a little old couple already...
i'll reread and review when I don't have to run for the bus
ZOOM

speechie42 January 23 2008, 16:02:22 UTC

Oh geez, I should probably be making a run for the bus too...

cazcatharsis January 23 2008, 16:04:03 UTC

LMAO, i ended up being late. I blame you. :D

speechie42 January 24 2008, 07:26:42 UTC

Hmph. Right back atcha!

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artemischan January 23 2008, 14:04:27 UTC

Oh, lovely, this is quite nice. The interactions here are just great, and I think Frenzy's starting to get a grip on how Nat and 'Cade's relationship is. I love it!

speechie42 January 23 2008, 16:03:13 UTC

Yeah, he'll probably freak out later when he sees them groping. lol

artemischan January 23 2008, 20:46:44 UTC

And that will make me giggle. Probably uncontrollably.

speechie42 January 24 2008, 07:28:03 UTC

Like this?

"Oh, sweet Cybertron!"

"Ah, Barricade, fuck yes!"

"G-g-gross."

:)

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speechie42 January 23 2008, 15:58:13 UTC

Thanks ^^