Cybernetics

[speechie42]

Finals this week. No time to proof. Enjoy.

Title: Cybernetics (chapter 36)
Rating: PG-13ish
Pairing: Barricade/OC
Summary: Uh...they're driving. Yes.
Warnings: Language?
Disclaimer: Do not own.

Comments

[okami_myrrhibis]

Nice interlude - still don't care much for Cade/Natalie as a pairing... but the interaction between them - much needed.

[speechie42]

Well, if you don't care for the pairing you probably aren't going to like the direction this is going in.

[mmouse15]

I like it. Well done and very enjoyable. I love how Barricade is bouncing Frenzy the spazz around - made me laugh!
And Nat/Cade is grinchy/sweet/funny/breathtaking all in one. Kudos to you for a chapter well done!

[speechie42]

Thank you <3

[darkdanc3r]

ambiguous... ambiguous. I love it. Poor Barricade. I love what he's doing to Frenzy, by the way. Absolutely brilliant. And seeing him so confused about how to deal with Natalie - I just kind of want to pet him and tell him it'll all be okay eventually.

[speechie42]

Boys are cute when confused. Especially boys like Barricade, 'cause they get all awkward and adorable...^^

[ashkaztra]

I love their bickering! They feel somehow much more real through their interaction. And Frenzy flying around in the back just made me grin. Damn spazz. *snicker*

[speechie42]

Yeah, I much prefer them being conversational. Or rather, bickering. ^^