Comments | szaleniec1000: Deserving Chapter 12

szaleniec1000

Deserving Chapter 12

Aug 16, 2010 21:46

Deserving Chapter 48 is a doozy, and by "doozy" I mean "squickfest", but all in good time. I'm hoping to get back onto a more regular schedule. The fic drags a little - it's about this point I gave up on it for a while when I was recapping on WGW before, as well - but from here on in the crazy goes into full overdrive ( Read more... )

ivory seed, bad sex, the dursleys aren't paedophiles, how do i used tense, expospeak, badfic:deserving, pov!fail, fucking self-awareness how does it work, insulin needed, rectuuum!, americanisms in the potterverse, the lowercase wizarding world, doubt your commitment to sparkle motion, kingsley is ooc, harry potter, epithet overload, said bookism, everybody hates harry, lube, passive voice

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trista_zevkia January 13 2011, 06:38:10 UTC

Is ivory seed what you plant if you want to raise an army of skeletal elephants?
LOL! Loved this line, but am beyond impressed that you can make it through this thing. I can't take anymore, not even for love of your snarky sporking!

szaleniec1000 January 13 2011, 22:51:05 UTC

Heh. Glad you liked what you did read, at least. There's a TVTropes page if you want a summary of the rest.

Proper noun magnuscoatl January 18 2011, 00:22:34 UTC

Wizard wouldn't be a proper noun even were it capitalised in the books because (as anyone dealing in grammarsnark should know) a proper noun is a noun which does not take a determiner, not just 'a noun with a capital letter'

Re: Proper noun szaleniec1000 January 18 2011, 00:30:39 UTC

Point taken. :)

shinigamihollow August 9 2012, 06:13:46 UTC

Have not read fic (debating if I should really...), but I have read some of your sporking and am enjoying it immensely so far! :)

But the breast milk being bitter just makes me kinda wanna throttle someone. Because, although I am not a mother, I have read (and heard) that breast milk is sweet, so why would it be any different for men? Also bitter taste can imply toxicity so....male breast milk is now possibly toxic? So then why can't wizard/witch babies survive without it? And just, so much logic fail even beyond this, cannot comprehend. Oh no wait must be MAGIC because WIZARDS. Just...this fic.