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Swimming in Suwannee, for zelost_mind (Dean/OFC, adult)

Sep 04, 2008 09:43

Title: Swimming in Suwannee
Author: regala_electra
Recipient: zelost_mind
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Dean/OFC
Summary: Dean's seventeen years old and finds himself falling for a swimmer who gives as good as he dishes out.
Author's Notes: As per the adult rating, there is sexual content and language. Word count is 11,160. Major thanks to my beta.

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( It's only the second week at Suwannee High and Dean’s ready to bolt. )

rating: adult, pairing: dean/ofc

Comments 23

vanillafluffy September 4 2008, 15:14:15 UTC

This is awesome. Love High School!Dean, and Beth was fun. Loved the cafeteria scenes.

At least they aren’t fucking Speedos.

Damn!

regala_electra September 16 2008, 20:01:27 UTC

Hey there, thank you so much for the feedback. :D I had fun writing the cafeteria scenes!

zelost_mind September 4 2008, 16:39:55 UTC

!!! THIS IS THE MOST PERFECT THING I HAVE EVER READ! It is WONDERFUL, omg. Sweet and hot and funny. Your Dean is just. DEAN.

"Even though he knows she’ll kick his ass all over again, he wants to try again.

Man, he is so messed up in the head."

&

"The universe, she is a harsh fucking bitch."

And I adored Beth, oh man. I laughed! And I may or may not have gotten a little wet eyed when he had to leave! I'd saved it to delicious before I'd even finished it.

Fantastic, really. Thank you so much. <3 <3

regala_electra September 16 2008, 20:08:27 UTC

OH HOW I DID NOT WANT TO DISAPPOINT. Heh I was totally looking through your list of likes way too much. I wanted to get everything in this fic that Would Not End. I could have gone on forever writing about the amazing adventures of Dean and Beth.

Kat had to reassure me that you would like this so I was a little nervous!

And I may or may not have gotten a little wet eyed when he had to leave!

Awww!

Seriously, you have no idea how THRILLED I am that you loved this, babe.

caithream September 4 2008, 16:58:52 UTC

AH God I LOVE THIS. So HOT, NGH, and the ending, aw gosh, I'm surprised at how sad I am. Oh horny teenager Dean, never stop being awesome.

regala_electra September 16 2008, 20:09:50 UTC

Oh hallo there, awesomesauce girl. Thank you so much for the feedback. Horny DEAN makes me exceedingly happy, no matter the age. *beams*

boogirl13 September 4 2008, 20:48:02 UTC

Funny and hot and sweet, then sad. Very nicely done. Whoever you are, you should step up and claim your props.

regala_electra September 16 2008, 20:10:29 UTC

*comes out of the shadows*

Thank you so much for the feedback!

connery_is_bond September 4 2008, 23:21:03 UTC

So I adored this story- it’s probably my favorite one out of this exchange yet- and I love Beth. She was so smart-ass and totally a girl Dean would like. It was nice to see Dean actually becoming friends with her before they had sex- it was nice to see a connection. I loved young Dean and the heartbreak that he pretends he doesn't feel. You're an awesome writer.

regala_electra September 16 2008, 20:18:29 UTC

Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback. I adore delving into characters and I really love to pair up Dean with the women of his past (and present...and future), it's something that I think I'll always be extremely fond of exploring.

I'm totally delighted that you enjoyed Beth because I really wanted to do service to the type of girl she's based on (sporty, popular-by-default, dedicated to what's important to her) while making her very independent as my prompter wanted, quirky. But I also dig quirky and I LOVE writing OFCs and hope that each one is a little different. But I totally loved writing Beth, writing her against Dean was a delight.

It was nice to see Dean actually becoming friends with her before they had sex- it was nice to see a connection.Oh coolness! Yes, I realized early on that this was the thing that would be the emotional drama of the fic, what happens when Dean realizes he doesn't want to fuck up a friendship because he's not the type to form that kind of a relationship and really values the companionship over ( ... )