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From: rosalui
Title: And Time Runs Out
Rating: PG-15
Summary: War is on the horizon for Konoha and its allies, and the very idea of what it means to be a ninja is being threatened. But Naruto has never been one to surrender, and for both their sakes, Sasuke finds it’s time to lay his demons to rest.
Warnings: Violence, language, smexing, and ( Read more... )
Title: And Time Runs Out
Rating: PG-15
Summary: War is on the horizon for Konoha and its allies, and the very idea of what it means to be a ninja is being threatened. But Naruto has never been one to surrender, and for both their sakes, Sasuke finds it’s time to lay his demons to rest.
Warnings: Violence, language, smexing, and ( Read more... )
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You already know I LOVE THIS FIC LIKE BURNING. And gah, that cover picture. *___*
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THANK YOU FOR THE AMAZING BETA JOB, BB, AND FOR PUTTING UP WITH ME!
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Both boys were so perfectly in character, and I loved all their interactions. I honestly wish they'd make this into a movie or something, if only so I could see the five kages fighting together. I think my favorite part was the fight between Lee and Sasuke, though. And the betting!
There are a million lines I want to quote back at you, but I especially loved:
Not gonna think about who, not jealous, not thinking about it, not gonna - Suigetsu is going back on the missing nin list, that fucker.
Ahahaha
I bet that’s why Kakashi still wears his mask. He wants to take it off, but he’s got a really dumb tan line.
Best mask theory I've heard yet lol
The doors slammed open. There was a gust of wind, and a blur of vibrant green. "YOU FORGET," boomed Maito Gai, ( ... )
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But thank you. :3 Any time you comment, I feel like dancing. I love you and your writing so much, I cannot even. :')
I LOVE GAI TOO. *_* THERE IS SO MUCH TO LOVE ABOUT HIM. ♥
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"Then after he took office, Naruto had come back on an official tour. He had walked right up to Sasuke’s cell, broken the lock, grabbed Sasuke’s arm, and just started walking."
”I’m taking him with me,” he’d said. “Try to stop me if you want.”
made me cry. this beginning. it's just. all kinds of awesome. i cannot name all the ways. i just. ;______________;
i'm done reading it now. I ABSOLUTELY ADORE IT. i... have no words. they are failing me. seriously. i don't know what to say to make you understand how much i love this piece. it's beautiful.
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”I’m taking him with me,” he’d said. “Try to stop me if you want.”
That's one hell of a sexy line.
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I love you, I love that I can recognize your writing style. Your stories, they’re NEVER deprived of an incredible, solid plot. Always, more than often, very action-packed, and god, you NEVER ceased to amaze me. Every goddamn time. God, I’m so proud of you.
I honestly, from the bottom of my heart, don’t get how you can write this amazingly even when you started it -very-- last minute. I mean. Seriously? You’re mental, woman!
On to the story. First of all, can I say that your Naruto made a superb Hokage! I’m so proud of him. I really could see Naruto being all epic and wise and mature yet still retained his never ending Narutoness. I guess that tends to happen when you add up Naruto and all those years together. Seriously though ( ... )
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I have no idea how people recognize my stories, but thank you, lol!
I wrote this in like a week. ._. Came up with the plot like three days before the deadline, and then handed it in WAY late. Ask Imaan. It was crap before I re-edited it. D8
I AM A BIG GAARA FAN TOO. THERE IS MUCH TO LOVE ABOUT HIM! *says it in my ~sexy voice~*
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We're like, Gaara's bitches or something LOL. Victims of his sexiness. Yum yum.
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I actually pretty much figured you out after 3-4 sentences. You know I love your style and I ♥ U :)
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